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Phantoms of Gettysburg

Fields that echoed with the muskets' rattle; Blood of Yanks and Rebs spilt in dire battle; Now serene with murmurs of restless ghosts, Of men who died among the frenzied hosts! Are those the sighs of souls heard with each breeze, As winds stir dancing leaves of ancient trees? Do winter winds shrieking 'bout Round Top Hill, Recall screams of men, their fate to fulfill? Heard are moans of dying men, laurels won, Or is it groans of pine boles 'neath sere sun? Lincoln's speech yet echoes to honor they, No matter the hue of cloth worn that day! Should phantoms yet ask if they died in vain? "Nay! Nay! Due to you this land rose again!" Entry for Mark Massey's "War Sonnet" Contest (6 January 2019)

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Date: 1/20/2019 3:27:00 PM
awesome, Robert. That Civil war was SOME war!!
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Date: 1/20/2019 11:10:00 AM
This is really beautiful, Robert. Congrats.
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 1/20/2019 3:53:00 PM
Thank you Dale. Best wishes as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H
Date: 1/19/2019 11:05:00 AM
Robert, a great descriptive and well written poem that arouses strong emotions. Congratulations on your win!:). Hugs Eve ~`*
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 1/19/2019 11:31:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comments Eve, and also for your continued support and encouragement. Best to you, Bob
Date: 1/19/2019 9:27:00 AM
There is nothing like a war sonnet from someone who has served in the military, Bob. The Civil War claimed more American lives than any other, I'm told. Big congrats on your win in the war sonnet contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/10/2019 4:50:00 PM
G'day Robert … you have been busy this year. Great to see. A well written sonnet that truly hits the heart thinking of all those young'uns who perished - thanks once again Robert - Lindsay
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Date: 1/7/2019 6:38:00 PM
Stirring! Truly inspired and inspirational. G.L. in the contest. ~ Gershon
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Date: 1/7/2019 8:07:00 AM
This is so well done, Robert. Best wishes for a win dear friend. Charlie
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 1/7/2019 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie. I had to do a lot of condensing it from the original to fit the sponsor's requirements but am pretty happy the way it turned out. God bless always - Bob
Date: 1/7/2019 4:09:00 AM
Robert this is an amazing sonnet, you took us back in time here!
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 1/7/2019 5:49:00 PM
Tlhank you, Arthur, for your gracious comment and contiued support and encouragement -Bob
Date: 1/6/2019 7:53:00 PM
Great entry Robert, best wishes...
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