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Phantasmagoria

As amber eve paints ochre skies Her lips I kissed, turn ruby rose And dreams of heart my passion vies As amber eve paints ochre skies When romance gleams in lovers’ eyes It’s me she picks the moon well knows As amber eve paints ochre skies Her lips I kissed, turn ruby rose October 29, 2020 Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 24- Triolet - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Title chosen: Phantasmagoria Eight syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com)

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Valsa George

Date: 4/18/2022 7:01:00 AM

A beautiful triolet . Here too you have packed as much of passion as possible ! Striking images, Vijay !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2022 4:15:00 PM

Congrats on your winning entry. Way to go. Very expressive and colorful work. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2020 6:27:00 PM

fantastic imagery, Vijay. Congrats to you.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/13/2020 1:49:00 PM

A smooth flowing Triolet, Vijay. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Edward Ibeh

Date: 11/13/2020 11:40:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this excellent triolet, Vijay:-) Happy Diwali!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/13/2020 7:22:00 AM

I'm back with CONGRATS, Vijay. Janice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2020 6:33:00 AM

Very passionate work. Enjoyed reading ..Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2020 2:22:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/12/2020 9:40:00 PM

Congratulations, Vijay , on the win!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/12/2020 5:42:00 PM

Very sweet Vijay. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/12/2020 3:14:00 PM

Hi Vijay, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your fine win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/3/2020 6:06:00 AM

Lovely, romantic triolet, Vijay. Janice

Elaine George

Date: 11/2/2020 2:38:00 AM

Great take on this form, dear Vijay. ~ Elaine

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/2/2020 5:33:00 AM

Much honored by your visit Elaine--many thanks.

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/1/2020 11:16:00 PM

Love this form of poetry, and your words suit it so well. great poem.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/2/2020 5:33:00 AM

Much appreciate Harry--many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/1/2020 5:21:00 PM

Wow. This is a winner. So well written Vijay. A special flow to it also!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/2/2020 5:32:00 AM

Thank you Heidi--much appreciate.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 11/1/2020 1:06:00 AM

Vijay Brilliantly done!! all the best in the contest!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/1/2020 7:21:00 AM

Thank you Krish--much appreciate.

Mike Bayles

Date: 10/31/2020 5:46:00 PM

i enjoyed your triolet, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/1/2020 7:20:00 AM

Thank you Mike.

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/31/2020 7:20:00 AM

I have never seen this form Vijay but seeing what you have done with this beautifully romantic verse has inspired me. Just lovely !! Hope you have been well, Happy Saturday !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/31/2020 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Mike--appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/30/2020 3:35:00 PM

Back to read this one again, Victor. Great poem!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/31/2020 5:32:00 AM

Thank you Angela.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/30/2020 3:01:00 PM

I'm not familiar with this poetic form, but your poem is stunningly beautiful with its images of the autumn sky. Best wishes for a win, Vijay!! Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/30/2020 3:41:00 PM

Much appreciate my friend--thank you for your kind feedback, Carolyn.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2020 12:56:00 PM

- Beautifully written, Vijay :) - - A new winning poem ... believe me :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/30/2020 1:39:00 PM

Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/30/2020 9:27:00 AM

Romantic love so colorfully expressed Vijay. Best wishes for the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/30/2020 1:39:00 PM

Much appreciate Sam--many thanks.