Vijay Pandit Poet Triolet

Phantasmagoria

As amber eve paints ochre skies
Her lips I kissed, turn ruby rose
And dreams of heart my passion vies
As amber eve paints ochre skies
When romance gleams in lovers’ eyes
It’s me she picks the moon well knows
As amber eve paints ochre skies
Her lips I kissed, turn ruby rose

October 29, 2020
Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 24- Triolet - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title chosen: Phantasmagoria
Eight syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com)

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Valsa George April 18, 2022 at 7:01 AM A beautiful triolet . Here too you have packed as much of passion as possible ! Striking images, Vijay !

Sara Kendrick March 10, 2022 at 4:15 PM Congrats on your winning entry. Way to go. Very expressive and colorful work. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2020 at 6:27 PM fantastic imagery, Vijay. Congrats to you.

Paul Callus November 13, 2020 at 1:49 PM A smooth flowing Triolet, Vijay. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Edward Ibeh November 13, 2020 at 11:40 AM Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this excellent triolet, Vijay:-) Happy Diwali!

Janice Canerdy November 13, 2020 at 7:22 AM I'm back with CONGRATS, Vijay. Janice

Sara Kendrick November 13, 2020 at 6:33 AM Very passionate work. Enjoyed reading ..Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2020 at 2:22 AM - Congratulations on your great win, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper November 12, 2020 at 9:40 PM Congratulations, Vijay , on the win!

Linda Alice Fowler November 12, 2020 at 5:42 PM Very sweet Vijay. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Alexis Y. November 12, 2020 at 3:14 PM Hi Vijay, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your fine win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy November 3, 2020 at 6:06 AM Lovely, romantic triolet, Vijay. Janice

Elaine George November 2, 2020 at 2:38 AM Great take on this form, dear Vijay. ~ Elaine Vijay Pandit November 2, 2020 at 5:33 AM Much honored by your visit Elaine--many thanks.

Harry Horsman November 1, 2020 at 11:16 PM Love this form of poetry, and your words suit it so well. great poem. Vijay Pandit November 2, 2020 at 5:33 AM Much appreciate Harry--many thanks.

Heidi Sands November 1, 2020 at 5:21 PM Wow. This is a winner. So well written Vijay. A special flow to it also! Vijay Pandit November 2, 2020 at 5:32 AM Thank you Heidi--much appreciate.

Krish Radhakrishna November 1, 2020 at 1:06 AM Vijay Brilliantly done!! all the best in the contest!! Vijay Pandit November 1, 2020 at 7:21 AM Thank you Krish--much appreciate.

Mike Bayles October 31, 2020 at 5:46 PM i enjoyed your triolet, Vijay. Vijay Pandit November 1, 2020 at 7:20 AM Thank you Mike.

Mike Gentile October 31, 2020 at 7:20 AM I have never seen this form Vijay but seeing what you have done with this beautifully romantic verse has inspired me. Just lovely !! Hope you have been well, Happy Saturday ! Vijay Pandit October 31, 2020 at 9:59 AM Thank you Mike--appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Angela Crabtree October 30, 2020 at 3:35 PM Back to read this one again, Victor. Great poem! Vijay Pandit October 31, 2020 at 5:32 AM Thank you Angela.

Carolyn Devonshire October 30, 2020 at 3:01 PM I'm not familiar with this poetic form, but your poem is stunningly beautiful with its images of the autumn sky. Best wishes for a win, Vijay!! Hugs, Carolyn Vijay Pandit October 30, 2020 at 3:41 PM Much appreciate my friend--thank you for your kind feedback, Carolyn.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2020 at 12:56 PM - Beautifully written, Vijay :) - - A new winning poem ... believe me :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit October 30, 2020 at 1:39 PM Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.

Sam Kauffman October 30, 2020 at 9:27 AM Romantic love so colorfully expressed Vijay. Best wishes for the contest. Vijay Pandit October 30, 2020 at 1:39 PM Much appreciate Sam--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel October 30, 2020 at 7:15 AM Romantic and extremely well crafted, Vijay:) Vijay Pandit October 30, 2020 at 1:39 PM Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Silent One October 30, 2020 at 4:03 AM Beautifully romantic my friend and what a sensual and passionate moment it would be.. Vijay Pandit October 30, 2020 at 5:51 AM Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, SO.

Victor Buhagiar October 30, 2020 at 3:12 AM Well constructed triolet, with great imagery. Very romantic too. Best for a win. ~~ Vijay Pandit October 30, 2020 at 5:50 AM Thank you Victor--much appreciate.

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