Vijay Pandit Poet Imagism

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July 25, 2023

Poem of the day on July 27, 2023

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Petitioning Spring of Tomorrow

Smile, O spring, smile, upon crimson arc of morning
Grinning through willows filtering golden sunbeams,
Sparkling from eyes of dew, glinting realms pristine,
Reveling through prairies, giggling tenor of streams, 
Glistening core of purple-iris, soul of flaxen-pansies.

Waltz, O spring, waltz, shimmying blushing peonies,
Meandering with butterflies chasing nectar carefree,
Bouncing moods of bees from tree to flowering tree,
Elated strumming rhythms fluttering woody-foothills,
Grooving with meadows, humming lyrics of winds.

Sail, O spring, sail, rowing glee of seas-undulating,
Buoyant on spirits rushing from rivers, tributaries,
Traversing through terrains, once frigid, decaying,
Zealous now to venture, to rollicking side of being,
Surfing waves questing summer of sandy beaches.

Dream, O spring, dream, of mythical northern lights,
Glimpsed from garden of sumptuous white gardenias,
Through womb of dawn, hued in lavender of lilacs,
Preening beauty of flora, scintillating dawning aura,
As yonder of skies shimmers motifs of green aurora.

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Hiya Sharma August 26, 2023 at 12:58 AM "Crimson arc of morning", " Golden sunbeams", "sumptuous white gardenias", "hued in lavender of lilacs" I'm swirling in the shimmering cosmic tapestries of spring that you've so delicately carved with your ethereal brush-quill.. Such mesmeric scenes with absolutely beautiful and impeccable flow! As always, a pleasure to read your wonderful writes.. :) Vijay Pandit August 26, 2023 at 5:37 AM So special to hear that from a gifted writer. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Hiya. Many thanks.

Judy Ball August 16, 2023 at 3:59 PM Ah Spring. The beautiful time of awakening after a long Winter sleep. Congrats on a well deserved POTD. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit August 26, 2023 at 5:37 AM Much appreciate Judy. Many thanks.

John Hamilton August 14, 2023 at 7:28 AM This is a wonderful write Vijay, worthy of potw. Congrats on top 100 new poems, I wish I could write as good as you. Stunning! Vijay Pandit August 26, 2023 at 5:36 AM You are always thoughtful and kind, John. Always an honor to see you on my page. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich August 9, 2023 at 12:33 PM wow, I see you got a POTD for this one. Way to go, Vijay Vijay Pandit August 26, 2023 at 5:35 AM Nice to hear that from you Andrea. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Akkina Downing August 8, 2023 at 7:32 PM Well deserved POTD this gem! It just made me smile too :) Simply beautiful and congratulations on POTD! Vijay Pandit August 26, 2023 at 5:35 AM You are very kind, Akkina. Many thanks my friend.

Heidi Sands August 7, 2023 at 11:45 AM Congratulations for POTD with this beautiful poem :) Vijay Pandit August 26, 2023 at 5:34 AM Many thanks my friend. Much appreciate, Heidi.

Linda Alice Fowler August 5, 2023 at 5:39 PM Vijay, I believe you are at your best when writing of the seasons. This is a beautiful ode to Spring and its lovely images that you so aptly bring to the page. Sorry I'm so tardy in bringing my congratulations my friend! :) Vijay Pandit August 26, 2023 at 5:34 AM Thank you Linda. Always a joy when you visit.

Michael Tor August 4, 2023 at 12:30 PM Vijay back to congratulate you my friend. Your Poem is so worthy of such a deserving honor of POTD. Again Congratulations to my favorite Word Wizard, and good friend... Vijay Pandit August 4, 2023 at 2:48 PM Always a delight to read your thoughtful comments my friend. You certainly spread goodwill on Soup with your kindness. Many thanks for your return visit and your valued presence on my page.

Sam Kauffman August 1, 2023 at 11:03 AM Vijay, congratulations on your POTD honor! Your invitation to spring literally sings, flies and floats through meadows, streams and fields of flowers! What a journey through beauty. Blessings of joy to you! Vijay Pandit August 4, 2023 at 2:45 PM Thank you Sam--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Jean Murray July 30, 2023 at 1:25 AM This poem brings a smile with it’s amazing imagery. Beautiful Vijay. Vijay Pandit July 30, 2023 at 7:04 AM So very kind of you, Jean. Glad you stopped by. Many, many thanks.

Judy Ball July 29, 2023 at 4:53 PM Oh you should have posted this one at the beginning of Spring. It welcomes Spring after a long cold Winter. Love it. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit July 30, 2023 at 7:04 AM Much appreciate, Judy--many thanks for your kind feedback.

The Situation July 29, 2023 at 1:36 PM Speaking to the elements, for them to respond. Like speaking to angels or gods. Which address the retorical. Better to ask and say Good Luck. Vijay Pandit July 30, 2023 at 7:03 AM Many thanks--much appreciate.

Susan Ashley July 29, 2023 at 8:52 AM Dear Vijay, the dramatic vivid beauty of your sumptuous verse takes my breath away. So rich in imagery and metaphors and lush with alliterative strings and phrases that shine like gems! Every line a line for my imagination to revel in! A song of the heart and soul spilled so eloquently from your golden pen and elegant artistry! Congratulations for POTD honors for this exquisite piece! A fav! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan Vijay Pandit July 30, 2023 at 7:03 AM So wonderful to read your glowing remarks, my friend. Quite special coming from a talented, gifted poet. Much appreciate your presence on my page, Susan. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Jennifer Proxenos July 28, 2023 at 2:33 PM Once again Vijay your chosen words pristine, your colors amazingly chosen and your flowers mentionEd in this poem my favorites especially all the lavender plants, swimmers surfing gigantic waves and crazy about butterflies and early morning dew on the grass, how we love Spring when it comes! HUGS AND BLESSINGS Jennifer Vijay Pandit July 29, 2023 at 8:12 AM You are so very kind my friend. Always appreciate your visit and thoughtful feedback, Jennifer. Hugs and blessings to you as well.

Sotto Poet July 28, 2023 at 7:48 AM As the golden rays of summer dance, your eloquent springtime verses illuminate the stage. Truly magical, without a doubt! Heartfelt congratulations to you, Vijay, for achieving the esteemed honor of POTD. Enjoy your honor Vijay Pandit July 28, 2023 at 2:56 PM You are always very kind my friend. Much appreciate your glowing remarks, Lasaad. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2023 at 5:33 AM A wonderful feat of imagery! All so lovely! I especially enjoyed the water imagery..following the undulating, buoyancy and traversing! Congratulations on a much deserved POTD, my friend Vijay! A fave. Vijay Pandit July 28, 2023 at 2:54 PM So very kind of you my friend. I am delighted to read your comments--so special as well to receive your FAVE, Kim. Much appreciate! Many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose July 28, 2023 at 2:58 AM Sail, O spring, sail, rowing glee of seas-undulating, with a hopeful heart, you usher me into believing, your poetry is always scented with beauty, congrats on your POD Vijay Pandit July 28, 2023 at 5:56 AM Many thanks Vienna, for you kind remarks. Much appreciate as always my friend.

Brandy Nicole July 27, 2023 at 6:46 PM As the summer sun serenades, your words of spring sparkle in the spotlight. So wonderful, indeed ! Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy Vijay Pandit July 28, 2023 at 5:56 AM Thank you for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate your presence, Brandy. Hugs to you.

Darlene De Beaulieu July 27, 2023 at 4:21 PM Hello Vajiy, Congratulations on the POTD A lovely poem about nature. also my fav. enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene\ Darlene De Beaulieu July 28, 2023 at 10:27 AM Hello Vajiy, Your welcome Vajiy. Congrag on the POTD. enjoy yur day my friend. /Darlene\ Vijay Pandit July 27, 2023 at 5:47 PM So special to receive your FAVE my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Darlene. Many thanks for your visit and heartfelt thanks for the FAVE.

Eve Roper July 27, 2023 at 2:40 PM Amazing verse, Vijay, congratulations on POTD Vijay Pandit July 27, 2023 at 5:43 PM Thank you Eve--much appreciate your kind feedback.

Tania Kitchin July 27, 2023 at 1:26 PM Vijay, a gorgeous imagery, congratulations on POTD! Vijay Pandit July 27, 2023 at 5:42 PM Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Tania. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham July 27, 2023 at 12:43 PM Beautiful writing as always Vijay, well deserving of POTD honours. Tom Vijay Pandit July 27, 2023 at 1:20 PM I am glad to see you again Tom, after a very long time. I am guessing you were vacationing somewhere, as I haven't seen your poems for a while. Much appreciate your feedback--many thanks. Hope to see you again soon--either on your page or mine.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 27, 2023 at 12:18 PM - A beautiful poem ... the radiance and energy of spring ... with clear and brilliant colours ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Vijay :) - hugs Vijay Pandit July 27, 2023 at 1:19 PM So nice to hear that from you, Anne-Lise. Always a joy when you visit. Many thanks.

Gordon Mcconnell July 27, 2023 at 12:10 PM Lovely springtime piece Vijay, with nice rhyme and flow too. Congratulations on the POTD, have a lovely day, Gordon Vijay Pandit July 27, 2023 at 1:18 PM Glad you liked the poem, Gordon. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks. Have a wonderful day.

Paula Goldsmith July 27, 2023 at 11:36 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful write. Spring is a great time of the year. Have a blessed day writing away.................... Vijay Pandit July 27, 2023 at 1:16 PM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Paula. Many thanks.

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