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July 25, 2023

Poem of the day on July 27, 2023

Smile, O spring, smile, upon crimson arc of morning Grinning through willows filtering golden sunbeams, Sparkling from eyes of dew, glinting realms pristine, Reveling through prairies, giggling tenor of streams, Glistening core of purple-iris, soul of flaxen-pansies. Waltz, O spring, waltz, shimmying blushing peonies, Meandering with butterflies chasing nectar carefree, Bouncing moods of bees from tree to flowering tree, Elated strumming rhythms fluttering woody-foothills, Grooving with meadows, humming lyrics of winds. Sail, O spring, sail, rowing glee of seas-undulating, Buoyant on spirits rushing from rivers, tributaries, Traversing through terrains, once frigid, decaying, Zealous now to venture, to rollicking side of being, Surfing waves questing summer of sandy beaches. Dream, O spring, dream, of mythical northern lights, Glimpsed from garden of sumptuous white gardenias, Through womb of dawn, hued in lavender of lilacs, Preening beauty of flora, scintillating dawning aura, As yonder of skies shimmers motifs of green aurora.

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/26/2023 12:58:00 AM

"Crimson arc of morning", " Golden sunbeams", "sumptuous white gardenias", "hued in lavender of lilacs" I'm swirling in the shimmering cosmic tapestries of spring that you've so delicately carved with your ethereal brush-quill.. Such mesmeric scenes with absolutely beautiful and impeccable flow! As always, a pleasure to read your wonderful writes.. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2023 5:37:00 AM

So special to hear that from a gifted writer. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Hiya. Many thanks.

Judy Ball

Date: 8/16/2023 3:59:00 PM

Ah Spring. The beautiful time of awakening after a long Winter sleep. Congrats on a well deserved POTD. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2023 5:37:00 AM

Much appreciate Judy. Many thanks.

John Hamilton

Date: 8/14/2023 7:28:00 AM

This is a wonderful write Vijay, worthy of potw. Congrats on top 100 new poems, I wish I could write as good as you. Stunning!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2023 5:36:00 AM

You are always thoughtful and kind, John. Always an honor to see you on my page. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2023 12:33:00 PM

wow, I see you got a POTD for this one. Way to go, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2023 5:35:00 AM

Nice to hear that from you Andrea. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/8/2023 7:32:00 PM

Well deserved POTD this gem! It just made me smile too :) Simply beautiful and congratulations on POTD!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2023 5:35:00 AM

You are very kind, Akkina. Many thanks my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/7/2023 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD with this beautiful poem :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2023 5:34:00 AM

Many thanks my friend. Much appreciate, Heidi.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/5/2023 5:39:00 PM

Vijay, I believe you are at your best when writing of the seasons. This is a beautiful ode to Spring and its lovely images that you so aptly bring to the page. Sorry I'm so tardy in bringing my congratulations my friend! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2023 5:34:00 AM

Thank you Linda. Always a joy when you visit.

Michael Tor

Date: 8/4/2023 12:30:00 PM

Vijay back to congratulate you my friend. Your Poem is so worthy of such a deserving honor of POTD. Again Congratulations to my favorite Word Wizard, and good friend...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/4/2023 2:48:00 PM

Always a delight to read your thoughtful comments my friend. You certainly spread goodwill on Soup with your kindness. Many thanks for your return visit and your valued presence on my page.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/1/2023 11:03:00 AM

Vijay, congratulations on your POTD honor! Your invitation to spring literally sings, flies and floats through meadows, streams and fields of flowers! What a journey through beauty. Blessings of joy to you!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/4/2023 2:45:00 PM

Thank you Sam--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Jean Murray

Date: 7/30/2023 1:25:00 AM

This poem brings a smile with it’s amazing imagery. Beautiful Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/30/2023 7:04:00 AM

So very kind of you, Jean. Glad you stopped by. Many, many thanks.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/29/2023 4:53:00 PM

Oh you should have posted this one at the beginning of Spring. It welcomes Spring after a long cold Winter. Love it. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/30/2023 7:04:00 AM

Much appreciate, Judy--many thanks for your kind feedback.

The Situation

Date: 7/29/2023 1:36:00 PM

Speaking to the elements, for them to respond. Like speaking to angels or gods. Which address the retorical. Better to ask and say Good Luck.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/30/2023 7:03:00 AM

Many thanks--much appreciate.

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/29/2023 8:52:00 AM

Dear Vijay, the dramatic vivid beauty of your sumptuous verse takes my breath away. So rich in imagery and metaphors and lush with alliterative strings and phrases that shine like gems! Every line a line for my imagination to revel in! A song of the heart and soul spilled so eloquently from your golden pen and elegant artistry! Congratulations for POTD honors for this exquisite piece! A fav! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/30/2023 7:03:00 AM

So wonderful to read your glowing remarks, my friend. Quite special coming from a talented, gifted poet. Much appreciate your presence on my page, Susan. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/28/2023 2:33:00 PM

Once again Vijay your chosen words pristine, your colors amazingly chosen and your flowers mentionEd in this poem my favorites especially all the lavender plants, swimmers surfing gigantic waves and crazy about butterflies and early morning dew on the grass, how we love Spring when it comes! HUGS AND BLESSINGS Jennifer

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/29/2023 8:12:00 AM

You are so very kind my friend. Always appreciate your visit and thoughtful feedback, Jennifer. Hugs and blessings to you as well.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/28/2023 7:48:00 AM

As the golden rays of summer dance, your eloquent springtime verses illuminate the stage. Truly magical, without a doubt! Heartfelt congratulations to you, Vijay, for achieving the esteemed honor of POTD. Enjoy your honor

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/28/2023 2:56:00 PM

You are always very kind my friend. Much appreciate your glowing remarks, Lasaad. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/28/2023 5:33:00 AM

A wonderful feat of imagery! All so lovely! I especially enjoyed the water imagery..following the undulating, buoyancy and traversing! Congratulations on a much deserved POTD, my friend Vijay! A fave.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/28/2023 2:54:00 PM

So very kind of you my friend. I am delighted to read your comments--so special as well to receive your FAVE, Kim. Much appreciate! Many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/28/2023 2:58:00 AM

Sail, O spring, sail, rowing glee of seas-undulating, with a hopeful heart, you usher me into believing, your poetry is always scented with beauty, congrats on your POD

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/28/2023 5:56:00 AM

Many thanks Vienna, for you kind remarks. Much appreciate as always my friend.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/27/2023 6:46:00 PM

As the summer sun serenades, your words of spring sparkle in the spotlight. So wonderful, indeed ! Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/28/2023 5:56:00 AM

Thank you for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate your presence, Brandy. Hugs to you.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/27/2023 4:21:00 PM

Hello Vajiy, Congratulations on the POTD A lovely poem about nature. also my fav. enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2023 10:27:00 AM

Hello Vajiy, Your welcome Vajiy. Congrag on the POTD. enjoy yur day my friend. /Darlene\

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/27/2023 5:47:00 PM

So special to receive your FAVE my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Darlene. Many thanks for your visit and heartfelt thanks for the FAVE.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/27/2023 2:42:00 PM

Magnificently done, Vijay. I appreciate how you captured the many aspects of spring. I like the personification you included--made spring come to life. I especially liked the 2d stanza..waltz oh spring! Here in Texas, though, spring has finished its last waltz, exhausted from the intense heat we always experience in July and August. Congrat on POTD, Sara Etgen-Baker

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/27/2023 5:45:00 PM

Yes--your part of the US is experiencing intense heat--stay safe! Much appreciate your glowing remarks, Sara. Many thanks.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/27/2023 2:40:00 PM

Amazing verse, Vijay, congratulations on POTD

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/27/2023 5:43:00 PM

Thank you Eve--much appreciate your kind feedback.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/27/2023 1:26:00 PM

Vijay, a gorgeous imagery, congratulations on POTD!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/27/2023 5:42:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Tania. Many thanks.

Tom Woody

Date: 7/27/2023 12:46:00 PM

Spring is quite lush here in Ne Ohio. You describe the sentiments of many well Veej

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/27/2023 1:23:00 PM

So nice to here from you TW. Much appreciate your visit--many thanks. I will check out if you wrote something new.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/27/2023 12:43:00 PM

Beautiful writing as always Vijay, well deserving of POTD honours. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/27/2023 1:20:00 PM

I am glad to see you again Tom, after a very long time. I am guessing you were vacationing somewhere, as I haven't seen your poems for a while. Much appreciate your feedback--many thanks. Hope to see you again soon--either on your page or mine.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2023 12:18:00 PM

- A beautiful poem ... the radiance and energy of spring ... with clear and brilliant colours ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Vijay :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/27/2023 1:19:00 PM

So nice to hear that from you, Anne-Lise. Always a joy when you visit. Many thanks.