Petition the Lord With An Open Heart

Petition the Lord with an Open Heart
       By Dane Smith-Johnsen

I shall petition the Lord with an open heart.
Letting my spirit seek His goodness always.
I shall cleanse my life with God's approbation.
Searching for understanding of just ways.
I shall not let mundane desires rule my choices.
Instead, I shall hope, pray, listen and live rightly.
Keeping the faith when life around me falters.
I shall allow uplifting to rule and bestow peace.
Believing His words and accepting His judgments
I shall commit to God for He is not the liar.
Immersing my body in holy practice.
Embracing all righteousness; freeing my spirit
I shall rely on God's lessons; end death's prison.
Surrounding disappointments with glory.
Encircling frustration with approval.
Rectifying confusion with understanding.
Disarming animosity with goodwill.
Seeking truthfulness; resisting dishonesty
Pursuing perfection; forgiving weaknesses
I shall celebrate goodness; driving away evil
God is not an illusion; He is real.
I shall petition the Lord with an open heart.
Calling upon His name everlastingly.
Recognizing His wisdom in my blessings.
Then, my heart shall rejoice as my soul soars.
Spirit and flesh combined eternally.
According to God's original plan.
                                 AMEN 


I couldn't help myself this morning...  
Written, with sympathy for the loss, in response to a comment on my poem, "Together"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 10/16/2009 11:42:00 AM
I think that this is GREAT! This is one that you should keep. It reminds me of Francis of Assisi. The middle is superb and memorable. You should be proud of this! Sorry about the lag in getting back to you all, but I was moving from New Jersey to North Carolina all last month into tis one. Forgive me. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 10/16/2009 11:42:00 AM
Well done. I would go so far as to frame this and display it. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 10/16/2009 11:40:00 AM
I think that this is GREAT! This is one that you should keep. It reminds me of Francis of Assisi. The middle is superb and memorable. You should be proud of this! Sorry about the lag in getting back to you all, but I was moving from New Jersey to North Carolina all last month into tis one. Forgive me. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 10/13/2009 2:12:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/13/2009 12:06:00 PM
Hi Dane, God Bless. I love this write, the thought of when the flesh and Spirit combined eternally. Beautifully, beautiful, miraculously, powerful! Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 10/11/2009 8:12:00 PM
What a beautiful creed you have composed, Dane! A great inspiration so beautifully written! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/11/2009 6:46:00 AM
wow! Dane Ann, I talked to Rhonda, then read your incredible prayer!... if that's not inspiration, I got no pulse!... well done! my friend!... jim
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