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We animals and after mature cogitation
Enunciate bury the hatchet and in peace abide
To the law of the jungle oppose our deprivation
Terminate the masquerade and nature commodities equally divide

Confide to pathetic humans the charge
To their lust grotesque for power leverage
Revamp hostility to supremacy attain
Ignoramus jackasses seeking to hold the reins

Pharaohs,stars and emperors long proclaimed
The commanded the skies and earth germane
Their bones under earth's scum alighted
Unhurriedly putrefied and fetid smell did remain

It though takes all kinds to make a world
With disparate feathers flock like a bird.
              Abdelwaheb Dhaou.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/24/2015 8:41:00 AM
P.S sorry for the mistakes again : Line9: tsar and not star Line 10 they commanded. Deeply sorry again.
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Date: 3/24/2015 8:02:00 AM
P.S: please read deprecation third line instead of deprivation. Thanks
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Date: 3/24/2015 7:10:00 AM
Indeed it "takes all kinds to make a world". Perfect society happens only in fiction...or in heaven. What an interesting and thought-provoking write you have here, sire. Impressed. :) Kim
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Abdelwaheb Dhaou
Date: 3/24/2015 8:04:00 AM
thanks heaps Kim! I am glad you liked it. It is up to you and me and every poet around to word this bittersweet reality in your sensitive pen. Thanks for dropping by !

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