Petals With Butterfly Wings

Let the petals get wings of butterfly tell the withering rose to shed its sorrow see how beautifully under the spring sky petals will spread their wings tomorrow. Tell the withering rose to shed its sorrow like butterflies on their first flights petals will spread their wings tomorrow catching spring morning's first sunlight. Like butterflies on their first flights colourful flowers will be in the air catching spring morning's first sunlight spreading fragrances every where. Colourful flowers will be in the air see how beautifully under the spring sky spreading fragrances every where, let the petals get wings of butterfly. © kash poet (kashinath karmakar) ********************************* By:kash poet Placement:1st; February 2013 Contest:Petals in The Wind Sponsor:Gail Doyle

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Date: 3/29/2013 5:50:00 PM
Love the beautiful soft images you have written here. It all flows so well. A real winner and thanks for stopping by today, Love, SuZ
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Date: 2/22/2013 1:14:00 AM
wow, I am happy you liked it so much, Kash. Have you seen all the awesome contests that are going on right now? I don't know how I will keep up with them and my weekend is going to be so busy!!! well, goodnight now. I have to try to get some sleep!!
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:15:00 AM
glad you liked my suggestion. and I just realized I had a butterfly poem put up same as you have a butterfly poem HERE.
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Date: 2/3/2013 9:45:00 PM
Many many congrats for this win dear Kash.
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Date: 2/3/2013 6:42:00 PM
you so deserved to be high on this list, Kash. Big congrats to you.
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Date: 2/3/2013 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot Kash i am proud to share your spot xx
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Date: 2/2/2013 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!! :)
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:08:00 AM
This beautiful poem was a winner from the first sunny day of spring!! Congratulations to you Kash! So happy to see you at the top of the list!
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Date: 2/1/2013 8:36:00 AM
If only these petals did...what a fragrant world we would live in. This is a beautiful poem, Kash !! Congrats on your win in the contest.
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Date: 1/31/2013 9:01:00 PM
Kash, . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD
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Date: 1/31/2013 6:16:00 PM
Congrad's on your win, Kash. Light & Love
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Date: 1/31/2013 4:48:00 PM
Fantastic piece! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/31/2013 3:48:00 PM
Congrats on your great winning work.Great poetic quality..Sara
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Date: 1/31/2013 2:21:00 PM
An excellent win for a great write ,...... Congrats....
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Date: 1/31/2013 12:56:00 PM
How beautiful Kash, this took me out of winter and into the season of light and things that flutter. It was just what I needed on theis cold winter day in Canada. Love, Lizzie
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Date: 1/31/2013 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations Kash!!! Well done!!! Big hugs. Deb
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Date: 1/30/2013 11:36:00 AM
Wonderful poem Kash:) Best wishes in the contest...Sadaf
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Date: 1/29/2013 6:09:00 PM
Just beautiful Kash! I stood under an apple tree losing its bloom and it is exactly as you describe. So Lovely to remember. Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 1/29/2013 12:15:00 PM
What a joyful feeling you give the reader in this poem, Kash. Your imagery is nothing short of brilliant. I have missed all of you, but am still very ill so I can only stop by once in a while. Take care, my friend, and best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/26/2013 9:57:00 PM
always a treasure and treat to read u Kash ..have so missed u luv and thankxx for prayers and concern during health crisis .. hope to be on more ..am on slow mend .. as health allows ..hope all is well with u my friend ..
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Date: 1/26/2013 3:33:00 PM
beautiful write, Kash - congrats on your wins, my friend
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Date: 1/24/2013 6:54:00 PM
Ahh...a breath of spring is in the air. Lovely !!
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Date: 1/24/2013 5:08:00 PM
Beautiful Pantoum, Kash. Especially the imagery...Thanks for visiting. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/24/2013 5:00:00 PM
...dearest Guru Kash...you brought me to my seventh skies...so lovely...thank you poet kashi <3 <3 <3
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Date: 1/24/2013 9:58:00 AM
Kash! Me love this; such a beauty ;) you got me smiling tonight ;) enjoyed this!
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