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For Love or Pain Contest sponsored by Ink Empress

Turquoise tears stain my face Like violet varicose veins Stains of sentimental sensuality Wrapped in white fears and black feathers For love has fuschia flown away Ruining reverie’s red roses Turning them black decomposes Any ink dried died in letters for love Would have fell on silver sword Sacrificed, sliding through heart Silky bloody poetic death He saves a cutting of brown hair And a crimson rose of despair Pressing between pages of art Like my onyx broken heart Was only a notch on burnt belt Firey from love’s hazing hell Wicked love spell wilting passion Kisses rationed refusing To hold wet tongue’s telling Of rebelling rose’s rise In spirit despite demise Petals of purple pain Painting passion with rain And teal tears tangerine train Of torment trailing behind Like a wedding dress Of jilted beauty Doing duty during dilemmas Flower to remember Pressed between pages Of a little black book Of love unreturned

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Date: 10/22/2024 8:45:00 AM
Hi Karen, you certainly put your heart and soul into this one, love how you get all the colours to fit together nicely,the way life should be. God bless. Xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/22/2024 10:37:00 AM
Thanks for reading John. God bless.
Date: 10/21/2024 10:01:00 PM
A lot of nice wild phrases, like "He saves a cutting of brown hair And a crimson rose of despair Pressing between pages of art Like my onyx broken heart"
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2024 10:43:00 PM
Thanks David!
Date: 10/21/2024 8:11:00 PM
I remember the flowers pressed inside books. Sometimes, I'd find an old book and see a pressed flower. There is a story in every one. This is a beautiful poem. It has a Victorian era resonance. A sad poem of remembrance. A beautiful composition.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2024 10:44:00 PM
I appreciate you reading it Hilda!

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