Petals Fall

The bloom is on us now and fear does make what's fragile quake pink and gold upon the bough petals quiver, fall, and shake. So thin, the skin, some opaque blossoms unfurl and lace the ground their life passes without a sound. Cry for the petal's fall yes, mourn the death of these little things the puss ywillow enthralls the halo of seeds on wing voiceless they bloom and fall down oh see fair Spring lose its royal crown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Harper Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 10:57 PM
I do, I do, of course if they didn't fall, I'd have all dead flowers so its not in vain, lovely poem Debbie!
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April 18, 2013 at 3:54 PM
Oh, I so FELT this one, Sis. There was something about the word VOICELESS, that really resonated in me. I love it when I read the perfect word, the one that should be right "there." hugs... cyndi must flayh
Oyewole Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 1:49 PM
Congrats on your win, Debbie
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April 15, 2013 at 9:19 PM
Debbie, congratulations with your beautiful poem. A very lovely winning poem in Gail's contest. take care * xox-PD
Hunter Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Debbie....Stunning. Congrats!
Sister Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 7:18 PM
Wow this was powerful. King like qualities here.
May Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 1:40 PM
A fine write and win...congrats
Lamoureux Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 1:15 PM
Congratulations Debbie!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:58 AM
ha you should break it up into puss y willow, congrats Debbie xx
Oyewole Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 9:30 AM
This a wonderful write... best wishes~ A.O
Bacha Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 5:32 AM
What a beautiful poem. Very expressive good job. How are you doing . Love Terry xoxo 7>>>>
Esquire Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 2:16 PM
Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations, Sounds like a Winner to me. Seriously they won't let YOU say what a Kittywillow really is. I see Everything turned out alright from the Phillipines. If YOU could have waited 24 hours I could have sent YOU some aid;been there done that.Worry Worry. Inspiring Ink from YOUR Quill. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
Phillips Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 7:43 AM
Hi Debbie this is a beautiful poem. I like the symbols and imagery that you have created in this piece.
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 7:58 AM
- Debbie, thank you for your beautiful poem - Good luck in the contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Komala Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 11:15 PM
thank you my dearest angel Debbie for your nice visit... am doing great and feel so happy reading your beautiful poems...such a feast to my heart ..wish you a blessing day <3 much luv and big hugs <3
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April 7, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Debbie...this is a magical write! I love the way you have described the falling petals and their short life span. We mourn knowing that we too are "flowers quickly fading...here today and gone tomorrow." Lovely...the asterix comment gave me a laugh! Love your version of the plant much better! ;)
Jones Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 8:28 PM
Very lovely Debbie ......can see the lace hit the ground....wonderful line.....Donna
Posey Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 6:37 PM
The fragrance created by your pen is heaven to experience. Great Job dearest Debbie. Hugs to ya...... Jake
Richards Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 4:14 PM
Lovely lovely!!! In spite on not being able to say (what used to be such an innocent word!!)....silly indeed, but not your poem! Lovely!!
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April 7, 2013 at 3:28 PM
message delivered any way dont worry bout them site
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 3:05 PM
Debbie now this is very eloquent, I like this a lot...David
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