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Petal Whispers

Every petal says "I love you" in vibrant sunset orange Some whisper "I adore you" as each is plucked and torn A hundred loving sonnets Each petal pens amour Dew drops drip with sentiment Fragrant with ardor The heart of every blossom bursts with love divine Poetic beats of passion Each color a new rhyme Blessed be such youthful zeal Sweet bouquets a must, Roses are the fleur du jour while others gather dust.

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Date: 3/9/2015 7:45:00 PM
Very nice rhyming pattern Kimberly and when you add in the beauty of the blooms, a it equals a lovely poem.
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Kim Shaw
Date: 3/9/2015 9:31:00 PM
Thank you for your kind remarks, Diane! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. hugs, Kimberly
Date: 2/23/2015 3:48:00 PM
Very nice imagery, Kimberly. A delightful read.
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Kim Shaw
Date: 3/1/2015 10:22:00 AM
Dear Cona, Thank you so much for stopping by to read my poems! I truly appreciate your very kind remarks. Hugs & love, Kim
Date: 2/7/2015 2:24:00 PM
ooh this is dripping with wonderful imagery Kim - a delightful write a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Kim Shaw
Date: 2/7/2015 2:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! You are very kind...love & hugs, Kim
Date: 2/7/2015 1:25:00 PM
This is sweet and romantic in keeping with the season.
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Kim Shaw
Date: 2/7/2015 1:41:00 PM
Thank you for the sweet remark, Richard......I proudly admit to my very romantic sensibilities, lol. Hugs, Kim

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