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Persuade & Be Persuaded

Alas within me something stirs and proves its worth. And once in form that I doth please, from mind, I mouthe, spread word towards wind. it moves, this living thought I cast upon the breeze. My thought flow ends licking my pensive shores. Though content changed and meaning torn, I await your response - flaming words that will consume my view, branding yours, blazing renewal. This steam haze rising with our thought, a height once beyond my reach. We share this learning as the cloud grows. Wade cautiously into my depths; unscathed I'll brave your embered soul. My words now flashing waves of sparks, while yours flicker to an ebb and flow. The thick mist that once deemed blindness, mediated our exchange - persuaded in our persuasion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 5/19/2016 2:00:00 PM
catherine ellaine, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Book: Shattered Sighs