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Good new,good news He said to me
'I have the power to set you free'
'Come ,along this path we'll walk',
I listened closely as He talked;
Eternal life and 'new life' within
upon Him I place my sin,
peace,wholeness and integrity
Free to become uniquely me;
Empowered to make a fresh start.
Placed as a son,I became a part,
co-heir within His kingdom life
no more to struggle with inner strife.

Good news,so true a message clear
I turned back to God,and banished fear.

Be
in
nature's
paradise-
a living chaos,
harmony without symmetry

words like window panes
crystal clear,never opaque-
penned for heavens' sake

essential stepping stones in the stream of self-knowledge
FULL CIRCLE
Childish eyes all bright and new,
all encompassing,alive,
unending days,years ahead,
sleep comes easy in our bed;
Taut skin,strength of vibrant youth,
old age remote and unthought,
the future is tomorrow;
Our seed into another
soon springs forth and generates
rings to the family tree,		
pa to granpa,comes to be;
Then at this one step removed
we step aside and observe,
reflect,look back,not ahead..
sleep,less easy,in our bed.

UNSEEN PILLARS
Love knows no boundaries within its heart,
once given in intimacy,cannot cede
an inch of territory to depart
the mutual promise, bound close by deed;
Love in its passion,holds all things clear
yet lays wide open,giving its all
and lives its life ,trusting without fear
a loyalty innate,of instinct's call;
With faithfulness it lays foundations sure
against all tribulation and heartbreak,
death's tempest certain storm,it can endure,
held by unseen pillars that cannot shake;
With neither rule,nor scale can we measure
the height,depth,breadth of this priceless treasure
 
OUT OF THE BOX
The end may become a beginning,
to go away can be to arrive,
life,as nature has its seasons,
sometimes short but oftimes long;
To sense the aroma of change,
to experiment a new attire,
walking without a map,
looking forward,neverback;
The past,as yesterday,will ever be
remembered,blessed,but filed away,
a stage,a stepping stone
a springboard to another day.
Today is done,tomorrow will be
a future adventure,rests with thee.

long parting kiss-

imprinted upon my lips

her lingering heat

old,neglected,careworn..but still swinging

An
opal
milky way-
footprint in the
night
A
symbol
in the sky-
pathway to a 
king.


Beach so crowded today
Everyman  and his wife are here
And no place to play
Cricket will be out I fear;
Hope the sun will come out
Brolly is at the ready
Look one or two are about
As it's raining rather steady;
Now is that a lightning flash
Keep calm,must not cry,
Earth and heavens seem to crash
Thunder echos in the sky;
Bathers,now in ones and twos
Into the ebbing flow
Now perhaps time for me to choose,
Get ready to have a go;
Or stay here,read and snooze

Alone
     he sat thinking
of this
          of that
whys and
wherefores-
       His yesterdays
faded now
but alive
        as today's
        newspaper-
His tomorrows
        yet to be
veiled,unknown
waiting
        the thrill
        expectation
of the new
experiences
         change
the same again
          but
             different

AUTUMN GOLD
crumbling deadwood in composting leaves,
retirement brings a life of ease

tears flood my cheek

I whisper au-revoir-

winter clouds my soul
AN ANACROSTIC VERSE
some poetic forms can read sO
either,front or backwarD
will make an odE

anacrostic- an acrostic where last instead for first letter 
of each line forms a word or phrase
If ever, words fall on deaf ears 
If ever, face is washed with tears
 If ever, voice is expressing fears 
Ever,this be our choice, in EARS,FACE,MOUTH as Satan nears-
hear Jesus voice

after George Herbert

worthy workshop of words
veritable vocabulary of verse-
syllable songs,short+terse
formal or free
perfect potage of poetry


a chemin blanc ramble
along blackberry bramble
with buzzard on high
o'er fields prairie dry;
sunflower black,seed in the sun,
sweetcorn husks,nearly done
wild apple and pear
tempt climbers who dare;
walnut ripen in husks
as afternoon turns to dusk
Nature's early warning call
Ete's soon will be Fall

images,with or without rhyme;
a moment of life,frozen in time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/24/2009 4:26:00 PM
I love this, the last line's insight is so fertile. There's a light side to chaos. Thanks for showing us this.
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Date: 5/20/2009 7:26:00 AM
Now this is beauty ... keep it blooming!
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Date: 5/18/2009 10:05:00 PM
a beautiful tribute to nature your words have style and grace,,fabulous,,and Thank you for giving me the inspiration of writing in this form and for hosting the contest,and especially for taking the time to leave your words upon my poetry,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 5/17/2009 11:55:00 AM
This is a great example of perfection in poetry. Wise and precise words. Lovingly, DAS- J
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Date: 5/17/2009 10:48:00 AM
Brain Well my friend again you storm the soup with flavor! Wonderful write! Love Laura :)
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Date: 5/17/2009 8:56:00 AM
You took the fibonacci by storm, and met it with excellence here!! Love this! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/17/2009 7:13:00 AM
Nature's paradise a living chaos?...so much in those lines Brian..this is wonderful and makes the mind think..
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Date: 5/17/2009 6:54:00 AM
Hi Brian Brilliant indeed! Love the way you used nature to get your point across. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 5/17/2009 6:37:00 AM
Wow. This is rather brilliant. You would certainly win in your own contest! Simply perfect. A double wow for me. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/17/2009 1:28:00 AM
Mmm...this is very thought-provoking indeed Brian... concise and very beautiful... Always, Farah
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