Perspective

it is another day an I’m in it
thanks to the miracle of life

in some way I am a vagrant
scavenging loitering sleeping rough
on the waste ground of unfulfilled promises

note to Self
focus on what there is
not on what illicit dreams posit
lack is relative
energy is there in abundance
but seeds must be sown
before harvest comes near

I am an allegory in the making
a metaphor for the meaning of life
one breath follows another
for the sun align with the stars

the playground of a broken mind
reaches out to the soul in the making
a rollercoaster ride is scary but sacred
every downfall offers opportunities 
and the chance of a new dawn

after all I am not a hobo on a park bench
most of all I have a companion
to share seat and settle
with beauty passion intellect and longing
which comes true
as dusk settles and the moon shines along

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Date: 11/20/2022 7:48:00 AM
Hello, Kai. Your positive perspective is encouraging to me. It's like a ray of sunlight that should be read each morning.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/20/2022 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Jenna. I am just emerging from a bit more depressed patch. I am glad that you feel encouraged. Kind wishes to you, Kai
Date: 11/20/2022 7:42:00 AM
Well written and i love the ending too :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/20/2022 9:25:00 AM
Thank you and kind wishes, Kai
Date: 11/20/2022 6:43:00 AM
- "focus on what there is not on what illicit dreams posit" ... not always easy, Kai ... but the right thing to do ... best wishes and hugs :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/20/2022 6:48:00 AM
The right thing to do indeed. Thank you and best wishes to you too, Kai
Date: 11/20/2022 4:22:00 AM
Interesting lines penned. It is good that you have settled and have some direction in your life. May life go very well for you and your loved ones. Sara
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/20/2022 9:27:00 AM
Thank you and kind wishes, Kai
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