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Doggie play at evening goes loud and stark That naughtily, pug with its moaned voice bark; Behind the door where the kids do remark Oh coiled yarn and steak-bone are tossed, we hark ! With this canine mess, why is the room dark? Laura Loo's Personal Memories Monorhyme 3/25/2016 Visual 1

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Eve Roper

Date: 4/4/2016 10:19:00 AM

Great write, Nette, congratulations on your win!!!

Brian Davey

Date: 4/1/2016 7:02:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Nette

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/31/2016 1:58:00 PM

Congratulations, Nette. How well I know who will sweep despite the insistence that dogs belong outdoors where they can roam. Doghouses can be heated and decorated at the owner's will.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/31/2016 8:32:00 AM

Very pleasant and enjoyable, Nette:) With al the animals we have in the house it seems like it's always the same people who get lumbered with cleaning up after them! Congratulations on placing first:) hugs // paul

Balveen Cheema

Date: 3/31/2016 1:33:00 AM

So sweet! Congrats on your placement, Nette!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/31/2016 12:26:00 AM

Congrats on ur deserved top podium with this awesome write nette ..

Lu Loo

Date: 3/30/2016 9:04:00 PM

Nette, love this! Mugsy is my baby boy! Poor Milo passed away 2 weeks ago... thank you for your entry in my personal contest :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2016 6:35:00 PM

just thought I'd stop by and say HAPPY EASTER.

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2016 9:13:00 PM

I see we chose the same visual...wonderful write Nette

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/26/2016 2:54:00 PM

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! Woof, woof, woof! How adorable!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2016 5:50:00 AM

- A lovely poem ..... to read with a smile, Nette :) - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Peterson

Date: 3/25/2016 2:35:00 AM

Neat monorhyme, Nette. I had intended to enter but had failed to see the part about five lines. Instead I wrote four stanzas of foiur lines apiece. Kind of blew my chance. Nice to yours, according to the rules.