Nette Onclaud Poet Monorhyme

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Personal Memories

Doggie play at evening goes loud and stark

That naughtily, pug with its moaned voice bark;

Behind the door where the kids do remark

Oh coiled yarn and steak-bone are tossed, we hark !

With this canine mess, why is the room dark?



Laura Loo's Personal Memories Monorhyme
3/25/2016
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Eve Roper April 4, 2016 at 10:19 AM Great write, Nette, congratulations on your win!!!

Brian Davey April 1, 2016 at 7:02 PM Congrats on a fine win Nette

Reason A. Poteet March 31, 2016 at 1:58 PM Congratulations, Nette. How well I know who will sweep despite the insistence that dogs belong outdoors where they can roam. Doghouses can be heated and decorated at the owner's will.

Paul Callus March 31, 2016 at 8:32 AM Very pleasant and enjoyable, Nette:) With al the animals we have in the house it seems like it's always the same people who get lumbered with cleaning up after them! Congratulations on placing first:) hugs // paul

Balveen Cheema March 31, 2016 at 1:33 AM So sweet! Congrats on your placement, Nette!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 31, 2016 at 12:26 AM Congrats on ur deserved top podium with this awesome write nette ..

Beautiful Scars March 30, 2016 at 9:04 PM Nette, love this! Mugsy is my baby boy! Poor Milo passed away 2 weeks ago... thank you for your entry in my personal contest :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2016 at 6:35 PM just thought I'd stop by and say HAPPY EASTER.

Joseph May March 26, 2016 at 9:13 PM I see we chose the same visual...wonderful write Nette

Poet Tacito March 26, 2016 at 2:54 PM AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! Woof, woof, woof! How adorable!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2016 at 5:50 AM - A lovely poem ..... to read with a smile, Nette :) - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Peterson March 25, 2016 at 2:35 AM Neat monorhyme, Nette. I had intended to enter but had failed to see the part about five lines. Instead I wrote four stanzas of foiur lines apiece. Kind of blew my chance. Nice to yours, according to the rules.

Arthur Vaso March 25, 2016 at 12:18 AM Loved this, the last line wraps it up, so to speak!

Jan Allison March 24, 2016 at 7:24 PM love this fun write nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith March 24, 2016 at 7:13 PM They are mischievous nette.

Daniel Turner March 24, 2016 at 7:08 PM Really love the humor, nette! Made me smile. Peace my friend:)

Carly Lalion March 24, 2016 at 6:48 PM Hah! This is pure fun until we clean the dirt. Humor at its best!

Gabby Sabre March 24, 2016 at 6:37 PM Funny romps from the dogs; now thwy should be grounded, lol. Winning poem!

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2016 at 6:27 PM so cute how you went for the mischief factor. Great job, Nette. I chose that picture too.