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Personal Memories - Three Generations Three generations in between them now so kindly lie; sweet great granddaughter and great grand-papa can now belie those years. She reads to him, and he so tenderly sits by... two children now, they share these moments that now clarify the bond of one on one where young and old does not apply. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Personal Memories-Monorhyme Poetry Sponsor: Laura Loo Iambic Heptameter - 14 syllables and 7 feet per line Judged: 03/30/2016 Used Photo #3 - Laura Loo's daughter Ella reading to her great grand-papa

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/3/2016 9:30:00 AM

A touching and uplifting poem, Sandra...and I love the final line! Congrats on this top win!! // paul

Brian Davey

Date: 4/1/2016 6:58:00 PM

Congrats on your win

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/31/2016 2:59:00 AM

Hi Sandra. Congrats for your first placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/1/2016 8:13:00 AM

Thank you, Teddy. Sandra

Balveen Cheema

Date: 3/31/2016 1:14:00 AM

Congrats on your wonderful write & placement, Sandra!

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/1/2016 8:12:00 AM

Thank you so much, Balveen. Hugs, Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/31/2016 12:04:00 AM

Congrats on ur deserved top podium with this awesome write Sandra..

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/1/2016 8:12:00 AM

Thank you very much, Dr. Upma. Hugs, Sandra

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/30/2016 9:16:00 PM

Sandra, congrats on your win with this sweet poem. Janice

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/1/2016 8:12:00 AM

Thank you, Janice. Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo

Date: 3/30/2016 8:35:00 PM

Oh Sandra..what can I say? Thank you for this beautiful and heart felt poem entry.. amazing, thanks for sharing :)-luloo

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/1/2016 8:11:00 AM

Thank you, Laura, for a most inspirational contest and for my placement. Hugs, Sandra

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/18/2016 8:49:00 PM

Very moving, Sandra. I really liked the "where young and old does not apply" part ... love transcends barriers. Nice use of enjambment too.

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/1/2016 8:11:00 AM

Thank you, Tim. I appreciate your in depth comment so much. Sandra

JAN ALLISON

Date: 3/18/2016 7:18:00 PM

oh so touching a write Sandra this is so moving. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2016 8:07:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. I had great inspiration from Laura's photo. Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France

Date: 3/18/2016 5:14:00 PM

Sandra, this poem touched my heart, so sadly beautiful, Laura will love it and I am loving it 7 ~

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2016 8:06:00 PM

Thank you, BW, for your visit, uplifting comment and 7. It touched my heart to see Laura's daughter with her great grand-papa. Hugs, Sandra

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/18/2016 4:32:00 PM

There is a lot of truth in these lines. Great rhyme Ms Sandra. Good luck in contest. Peace nice lady:)

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2016 8:05:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel. The picture was very inspiring. Sandra

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/18/2016 3:46:00 PM

This is so sweet...hard to do monorhymes...at least for me..you didnt9bb seem to have a problem..BG

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2016 8:04:00 PM

Hi Barbara, thanks for the visit and nice uplifting comment! Hugs, Sandra