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Personal Memories - Three Generations Three generations in between them now so kindly lie; sweet great granddaughter and great grand-papa can now belie those years. She reads to him, and he so tenderly sits by... two children now, they share these moments that now clarify the bond of one on one where young and old does not apply. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Personal Memories-Monorhyme Poetry Sponsor: Laura Loo Iambic Heptameter - 14 syllables and 7 feet per line Judged: 03/30/2016 Used Photo #3 - Laura Loo's daughter Ella reading to her great grand-papa

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Date: 4/3/2016 9:30:00 AM
A touching and uplifting poem, Sandra...and I love the final line! Congrats on this top win!! // paul
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Date: 4/1/2016 6:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/31/2016 2:59:00 AM
Hi Sandra. Congrats for your first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/1/2016 8:13:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy. Sandra
Date: 3/31/2016 1:14:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful write & placement, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/1/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Balveen. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/31/2016 12:04:00 AM
Congrats on ur deserved top podium with this awesome write Sandra..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/1/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thank you very much, Dr. Upma. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/30/2016 9:16:00 PM
Sandra, congrats on your win with this sweet poem. Janice
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Date: 4/1/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, Janice. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/30/2016 8:35:00 PM
Oh Sandra..what can I say? Thank you for this beautiful and heart felt poem entry.. amazing, thanks for sharing :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/1/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, Laura, for a most inspirational contest and for my placement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/18/2016 8:49:00 PM
Very moving, Sandra. I really liked the "where young and old does not apply" part ... love transcends barriers. Nice use of enjambment too.
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Date: 4/1/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, Tim. I appreciate your in depth comment so much. Sandra
Date: 3/18/2016 7:18:00 PM
oh so touching a write Sandra this is so moving. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/18/2016 8:07:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I had great inspiration from Laura's photo. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/18/2016 5:14:00 PM
Sandra, this poem touched my heart, so sadly beautiful, Laura will love it and I am loving it 7 ~
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2016 8:06:00 PM
Thank you, BW, for your visit, uplifting comment and 7. It touched my heart to see Laura's daughter with her great grand-papa. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/18/2016 4:32:00 PM
There is a lot of truth in these lines. Great rhyme Ms Sandra. Good luck in contest. Peace nice lady:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2016 8:05:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. The picture was very inspiring. Sandra
Date: 3/18/2016 3:46:00 PM
This is so sweet...hard to do monorhymes...at least for me..you didnt9bb seem to have a problem..BG
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2016 8:04:00 PM
Hi Barbara, thanks for the visit and nice uplifting comment! Hugs, Sandra