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Perplexity

Through the blood rushed eyes Monotone faces stare They point to the ocean Who smacks its salty lips Bright red clouds in the sky Followed by jet black clouds in the sea Sandy people engulf me The mind flying but the body dying As my soul summersaults through the gas Utter bewilderment and aggravation New lost sights somewhere in a dream Regrettably I can’t sleep Hallucination of the knowledge organ As saccharine as pure sugar cane Might save my sanity after all.

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Jeffry Cohan

Date: 5/14/2011 6:49:00 AM

this is free cee-from phreepoetree and u said one of my poems made you giggle, sorrowfully it sounds as if u find giggles a rare commodity i read a few poems of your's and you have a poetic license for sure.this one, your're latest, although not great, is still as great as you can come to being great sans being great. your's in giggles, a gaggle of geese, goose under glass sorry they were out of pheasant fondly free cee!~sacharine is supposedly sweet but it's just "the opiate of the masses

Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/14/2011 10:43:00 PM

I find things that make me giggle all the time. It's what keeps me some what normal. However, most of my poems are darker because it is my soul way of venting. I very much appreciate your comment! Although I have trouble reading the way you type and say things in comments and messages...