Perplexing

He's never romantic_wooing to him a chore
He's got other things more important to do 
But sex he always wants and still wants more 
When others get his attention, he bids wife adieu 
Always doing for others, not letting any him outdo

I know he just doesn't understand females
Thinks she is like the male always ready for sex
If she isn't ready for advances to him betrayal
He feels a sense of serving church_ community projects
Doesn't understand wife's needs, this just too complex


Two Quintains for
Contest: You Do Understood
Sponsor: Cyndi MacMillan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/10/2012 8:02:00 PM
Well put and wonderful and insightful write Sara. Hugs
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Date: 8/2/2012 11:32:00 PM
Congrats Sara.
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Date: 8/2/2012 5:24:00 PM
I'm sure this applies to many. Congratulations on your win Sara. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/2/2012 8:27:00 AM
congrats Sara on an outstanding write and win for this challenge luv.. top notch piece..
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Date: 8/2/2012 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your 7th place win in Cyndi's 'You Do Understand" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2012 11:51:00 PM
Sara,, congratulations with your wonderful win in Cyndi's contest... xox~PD
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Date: 7/21/2012 11:27:00 AM
yes, some men are certainly like this, Sara. a sure winner here, my friend - and congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 7/20/2012 3:08:00 PM
Hey I know of men just like this! Sad too if you ask me! To enter the soul of a woman is to understand her complexities and the needs she desires! Also for deeper intimacy, understand her heart of love! I just love this write Sara, you have done excellently with the insight within this write! This is a supreme piece my friend! Great Work!!
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