Perpetual Rain

Darkness, the day she went away,
perpetual rain claimed his heart.
“Hope” her prognosis didn’t sway;
misty mournings, being apart.

His reason for being she was.
Darkness, the day she went away,
his fragile heart came to a pause.
Erased were hopes for one more day. 

Laughter he heard from kids at play;
their joy could not revive his dream.
Darkness, the day she went away,
he recalled hearing seagulls scream.

He looked to heaven, asking why
there was naught he could do or say.
Tears still fell as sunset drew nigh;
darkness, the day she went away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Hamilton Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 3:57 PM
congrats on a fine win Shadow x smile
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 12:05 PM
Congrats on your great win...Sara
Guzzi Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 11:27 AM
Wonderful writing! I've missed your voice. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 12:41 AM
Carolyn, congrats on winning 5th place in my contest.
Morgan Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 6:23 PM
poetic sadness Congrats on yr win. Morgan
Johnson Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 11:25 AM
Hi . Glad to see this finally judged and you are a winner. Love, Joyce
Maverick Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 2:06 PM
Pleased to see your H M Carolyn, and to read this piece today..)
Arno Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 9:40 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon
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January 6, 2012 at 8:46 AM
Congrats again on your win too. Thanks, bl
Brown Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 7:17 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Abstract Me" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 5:46 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing Carolyn. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
November 27, 2011 at 7:19 AM
An excellent entry to the contest Carolyn.Loved it!Best wishes.
Chappell Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 9:36 PM
powerful ,wonderful ,master piece all in one love duncan and ceizar xx
Horne Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Powerful piece indeed, my friend
Johnson Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 10:46 AM
I'm crying now from what you've written. It takes time to heal when the heart get's smitten. A world for two has now turned one. He'll see her again when his days are done.
Maverick Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Its very Dark:).. Carolyn, however quite a sensitive dark write..and i think should do well in the contest, all the best..
Babcock Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 12:08 PM
It has been ages since I wrote a Quatern and you have done an excellent write for Dr. Ram's contest. love phyl
Sivey Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 10:50 AM
Fantastic write Carolyn! You sure know how to write a Quatern! I'm sure you will do well in DrRam's contest!! Incredible work!!
Lane Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 10:45 AM
I know, I know, I know, I know...
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