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“Let yourself be silently drawn by the strange pull of what you really love. It will not lead you astray.” Rumi Life can be an incomplete glossary, speech a haunting ghost, in search of a perspicuous poem - to express unspoken thoughts. I remember when she said, "Cue me poetry" So, I became her perpetual poet, engraving sweet soulful words upon her bitter spiritless lips. Fate had turned her into the Queen of Darkness, but my heart glows in the dark. Together we illuminated like a trillion twinkling stars, outshining the enigmatic effervescent moon. Her essence infused a refreshing presence, like morning sunshine after a night of rain. Slowly she became a pilgrim of my poetry, and I, a sojourner lost within her soul. As I wandered through her secret chapters, my word weaving revealed her book of scars, each drop of ink resembling her tepid tears. Each vexatious verse purified through a catalyst of catharsis, healed her wounds. We are like quill and scribe, vowels complimenting consonants, completing an impeccable vocabulary - without her there is no muse.

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Date: 12/3/2023 9:45:00 AM
I love the Rumi, Quote, Silent One, it is equal to the poem you share with us today. Your poetry is inspiring and a wonderful blueprint for us to learn from. Just reading your poetry will help me to present my thoughts in a more poetic way. Thank you, for another FAV, Bill
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Date: 12/2/2023 4:48:00 PM
A really beautiful and haunting love poem! To heal someone, is the best purpose anyone can have- and you described that so well. I really enjoyed reading this!
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Date: 12/2/2023 4:46:00 PM
brilliant and stunning poetry, Silent One. I don't know where to begin...I agree with the metaphor "life is an incomplete glossary." I also agree with the last verse..'we are like quill and scribe...no muse." I am almost breathless and in awe of what you and your muse have created here. Have a lovely evening, Sara
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Date: 12/2/2023 3:08:00 PM
Ahh, The mysterious Muse. In peoples work I've seen master pieces. And I sometimes ask where did the genious come from? And in my own work it magically appears.
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Date: 12/2/2023 3:02:00 PM
Together we illuminated like a trillion twinkling stars, outshining the enigmatic effervescent moon---Wonderfully descriptive of love, scintillating flame of heart. Much enjoyed the romantic voice of your poem, SO.
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Date: 12/2/2023 2:56:00 PM
There are many who write poems, but there are very few who write poetry, you poet write poetry, poems are from the mind, poetry is from the soul
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Date: 12/2/2023 1:17:00 PM
Absolutely stunning dear SO. I agree with dear Inky- you are poetry. It flows through you sometimes gushing, sometimes gently swirling. Your way of expressing is astounding.’ each drop of ink resembling her tepid tears’’ without her there is no muse’. Always in awe and immense admiration for your poetry. Thank you for sharing your incredible gift. Blessings to you :):)
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Date: 12/2/2023 12:57:00 PM
- Really beautiful ... "Together we illuminated like a trillion twinkling stars, outshining the enigmatic effervescent moon" - Even with scars and tears...your poem is glowing, my friend :) - hugs
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Date: 12/2/2023 12:37:00 PM
Wow, Silent One, your poetry is very stunning! Love is magical, but it can also be difficult to comprehend. I've realized that love is the most precious gift we can offer and receive, so we should cherish and welcome it whenever it arrives. Your words, as a brilliant poet, are so extraordinary, they enchant and astonish.
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Date: 12/2/2023 10:42:00 AM
"Slowly she became a pilgrim of my poetry, and I, a sojourner lost within her soul." Very beautiful. Love so magical!..and often unpredictable! I have learned to take whatever is offered...for it is the most precious thing we have to give and receive.
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Date: 12/2/2023 10:39:00 AM
You are poetry, you breathe such beautiful captivating words that would leave any reader in awe dear silent one. If this isnt perfection i dont know what is. You’ve used poetic techniques but still made it flow so seamlessly, which is rare and hard to do. I especially love “Together we illuminated like a trillion twinkling stars, outshining the enigmatic effervescent moon.” Impeccable! Imagery depth and word choices here all adds beauty to the emotions expressed. This is another one of my faves
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Date: 12/2/2023 10:40:00 AM
I also love your pictur btw: is that you in it? Sunsets are my thing. And it surely looks like a gorgeous sunset there: pleasure reading this dreamy and soulful poem
Date: 12/2/2023 10:22:00 AM
Ahhh... the amazing muse, the whisper, the sigh, the breathe of delight, music in the smile, laughter in the night, the color of a world bleeding poetry, brilliant lines, emotions alive. I love this so, sweet friend. Your words continue to sing, ringing eloquence through my soul, melodies of light and hope, wonders forever bold, everlastingly warm. I always love to read what you write and I always feel blessed by your insights. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 12/2/2023 9:57:00 AM
she became a pilgrim of my poetry, wow, your muse is gold here, in Italy it would be 24 carat of course :)
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Date: 12/2/2023 7:41:00 AM
That'll tug the heart strings, neatly outlined with words justifying the R poetic form, nice, Silent One.
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