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Perishable

Perishable Immortal soul cries, Passion fails to turn me wise, Time can't check my craze, Memories form dense haze, Perishable to pay price! Tanka- 5/7/5/7/7 Written November 4th, 2014 By Dr. Upma A. Sharma

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/8/2014 7:11:00 AM

Interesting work..Very deep..Thanks for the visits to my page..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/8/2014 8:46:00 AM

Thanks Sara! Appreciate ur visit n kind words! U r so very encouraging always!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/7/2014 1:54:00 AM

The lessons we need to teach ourselves are the most difficult to learn. Especially when it involves passion and failure.... This was a soulful and expressive write, Dr. Upma. Great work!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/8/2014 3:48:00 AM

Thnx Kelly appreciate ur kind words n visit !

Eve Roper

Date: 11/6/2014 5:16:00 PM

Good write Dr. Upma, memories are to forget. :) love eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/8/2014 3:49:00 AM

Thnx for ur wonderful visit n words Eve! Hv a blessed day!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/6/2014 4:55:00 PM

A beautiful, thought-provoking Tanka, Dr. Upma. Some memories cannot be erased by time and I've never grown any wiser by falling in love. Indeed, sometimes the price we pay of passion seems very high, but we still want love in our lives. Enjoyed your Tanka and appreciated the message very much! Love, Carolyn

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/8/2014 3:53:00 AM

Yes u r right Carolyn! Even I got no wiser as I thought! Thnx for ur kind visit!