Perhaps This Is Why...

If
HE came
back again,
we would do it
too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 12:26 PM
maybe "could" in line 4? How would i go about writing a play? (That was a past life experience...one of my deaths ;) Did Ya git y'er w'rd?
Brown Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 5:11 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in John's contest Gerard. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 7:40 PM
Your words hold truth, Gerard...I've always believed this..I'm afraid nothing has changed..Great job! Peace, love, Audrey
Anderson Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Congrats on your win Gerard! Hope ya doing well, my friend....JA
Freeman Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Hello again, Gerard! I took your suggestion on the word and added it to the poem, "What They Say And Play." Works well in the poem, from (II Thess. 2:3) . Agape, Moses
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June 2, 2010 at 4:35 PM
U are so sweet and kind Gerard.. years ago I had three soft back 8 x 10 books in print and they flew off the shelves... lots of the poems are on site here ... did not have them republished as costs were so high and today they are through the roof ..to do on your own... the newer ones I do not as yet but .. a publisher involves money too and this working girl got laid off weeks ago and cannot afford to print books now.. OH but what a dream.. when time is right perhaps.. glad u enjoy..ideas?
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June 2, 2010 at 3:38 PM
OK those are North Jersey and I am South Jersey and its Wildwood Beach and it was last year 2009 Summer and its true story and the bikini was yellow on the model and not the flagpole.. but this year I got into my own red one and its all good now..haha..thankxxx Gerard for your vote of confidence in my poetry... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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June 1, 2010 at 8:32 PM
oh, this is sad and scary because it is likely true. Very well done, Gerard. Luv,Andrea
Fraser Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 11:18 AM
Many congratulations Gerard on your win in John's contest >> James
Freeman Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Yes If He came back all humanity of the mind would still do the same thing, for the darkness of the mind, would not seen any better the second time around. The change has to come from our Agape cores, for there is no power to see except from the Agape, Truth. Thanks Gerard, for your support in this contest. Agape, Moses
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June 1, 2010 at 2:28 AM
Congratulations Gerard on this winning piece. (^_^) Noel.
Johnson Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 8:47 PM
i'm afraid that is true. congratulations on being a winner. Love, Joyce
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May 31, 2010 at 8:19 PM
Congrats Gerard on your winning poem in John's contest with this wonderful faith poem so special and so powerful in its meaning.. enjoy another on your night of wins.. dear friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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May 31, 2010 at 8:18 PM
What a wonderful inspirational message. Congratulations on being one of the winners in John's contest. Enjoy your honor. Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 6:30 PM
OH yes ..right on with the movie .. it is so awesome and was my MOM's favorite movie ..she got me hooked on it and my other all time fav.."Wuthering Heights" with Olivier and Oberon..WOW what acting... what movies back then... thankxxx Gerard... u are a special guy..luv.. Linda-Marie...
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May 31, 2010 at 6:28 PM
Your words are so true Gerard and I think so too.. and U are most welcome .. I knew as soon as I read your entry it had everything I was looking for in the poem for the contest criteria... now go and look at my new one posted and get going my friend... with luv ..from the "Sweetheart"... this contest and blog are yummy delicious.. luv..
Richards Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 7:38 AM
I have often thought this same thing....sad, yet oh, so true! Well done, Gerard! ~ Carrie
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May 31, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Sad but that probably is true given how little we seem to learn from the past. Interesting perspective on the topic. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
A  Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 4:00 AM
This is a good thought of a pass reality, in which would be a repeat of an opinion or the truth. Well done on the message trulllly enjoed. Have a well planed out day,,IRMA
Mehta Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 3:14 AM
A nice novel thought
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May 30, 2010 at 9:40 PM
It is possible if He came in a different way that is expected. It was the case of Jesus. Great write, Gerard. Best wishes, Caroline.
Dillard Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 9:12 PM
Enjoyed the poem. Good Luck in the Contest! RAY
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May 30, 2010 at 8:53 PM
Nice one, I wonder if you are speaking of our Lord. I do not know It sounds so interesting. Enjoyed ,..p.d.
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