Justin Bordner Poet Epic

Perfume In the Desert

I follow an unseen trail of your seductive perfume
through the sand plains and dune spines,
the moon beams a target on your Temple
a wave of shadow glow in the deep night,
the cloak of my heart flutters
as I see you,  gowned in the youth of star light,
a woman with no age, fresh and ready for love
in secret chamber made for the pulse of passion
a shelter from storm and sorrow,

You greet me as Warrior with eyes radiant in hunger
a smile that ravishes my final impulse of suspicion,
you tell me to let struggle escape from shoulders stiff
to remove my worry of what if and the clutch of false desires,
the need for your erotic enclosure of my body ensues
my heart and hardened limb speak the same language
an ancient tongue of wonderlust
want wettens my thirsty mouth for you,
I claim you as my Goddess of divine caress,
leading me into your valley of honey cream
we elope into the eclipse of desert bliss -

J.A.B.

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Charmaine Chircop September 30, 2014 at 9:01 AM The eclipse of desert bliss.Really love this.May your warrior girl always bring you frosted manna on your lips.An exquisite poem,Justin. Justin Bordner September 30, 2014 at 8:10 PM My Warrior Girl will feed my manly needs with rare nectar and violet moan, and shall continue to noursh my soul with her tears and tenacious genius Charma...J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich September 18, 2014 at 9:51 PM a very sexy desert bliss it is!! Gosh, if it were only ten lines, it would have made the perfect entry for Nette's contest. She loves great imagery!! Justin Bordner September 19, 2014 at 2:58 AM To share rare and warm moisture in the rough blue of a cool desert night Andrea. Sexy in a thousand ways, hot in one kiss! You and Nette are fabulous! I hope you two enter all of my Contests, thr next one, proceeding Dinvine Intervention is going to be delicious! Thanks for the love. J.A.B.

Jay Loveless September 10, 2014 at 1:41 PM Sensual sexy Beautiful write, like painted imagry. Jay Loveless September 12, 2014 at 10:01 PM Beautiful Justin Bordner September 11, 2014 at 2:42 AM Two hearts in the silent night, textured in passion and secret in color Jay...J.A.B.

Justin Bordner September 9, 2014 at 8:54 PM There a beautiful series of physical, emotional, romantic descriptions to visualize, even a beautiful series of colors and movements. I smile proudly knowing my poem fed your ecperienced imagination something riveting and lovely to consume Lucilla...J.A.B.

Lucilla Carrillo September 9, 2014 at 9:30 AM This is very beautiful, as I was reading I could just picture the two lovers. Thanks for sharing. Have a blessed day... Lucilla Justin Bordner September 10, 2014 at 12:31 PM :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 7, 2014 at 4:36 AM your three last lines is an explosion of passion.. :) I love the first stanza better though.. :) Justin Bordner September 7, 2014 at 1:01 PM Yes Olive, the first verse speaks of rare lovers in a rare place, meeting in a sanctuary of hot mystery. Good to have you come by. J.A.B.

Regina Mcintosh September 5, 2014 at 11:37 PM I enjoyed your poem. Romantic :) Happy writing with love and prayers, Gina Justin Bordner September 6, 2014 at 1:27 AM Our romance simmers like the Desert's day, and has the spice of It's night Regina...love and prayers indeed Regina, thank you! J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux September 5, 2014 at 10:03 AM A romantic masterpiece, strong yet subtle filled with desire and erotic imagery. Bravo! Justin Bordner September 6, 2014 at 1:33 AM We were led to eachother by love's moonlight Richard. There is divine poetry in our affection. The subtlty is of magic my friend. J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal September 4, 2014 at 1:31 PM These lines are strong and lush in riveting passion and hunger -"the need for your erotic enclosure of my body ensues my heart and hardened limb speak the same language an ancient tongue of wonderlust" ..they are memorable and just one example of your masterful way of expression...I like how she draws him into her embrace, offering so much more than love, but wisdom, and perhaps some empathy too... the perfume of your work pervades my air this morning. Thanks Justin! Always, Laura Justin Bordner September 4, 2014 at 8:28 PM She and I are overcome by passion to understand eachothers strengths and stress, to feed one another rare healing and encouragement. Your deep comments confirm that this poem justifies what we share. I feel your stimulation Laura, and its a privilege to share with you these things. J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal September 4, 2014 at 1:28 PM This poem is masterful in strong passions of mutual sensuality and love. Two people, or two beings, that know each other, bear one another and are wholly united. You have a way of setting the mood right off the bat, and pulling the reader straight in. Many of the lines gave me tingles and goosebumps.. -- Justin Bordner September 4, 2014 at 8:20 PM Ooo....I relish that compliment Laura, tingles and goosebumps.......the spirit of this poem must be strong to elicit those throughout you. Your analysis of poetry is surpassed by no one! You always find a way to grip and study the frame work of Art, its such a beautiful process to observe in you Laura. Yes, immediate spirit to the heart Laura...J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A September 3, 2014 at 11:34 PM Sending soup mail, about your comment. PD Justin Bordner September 4, 2014 at 12:19 PM :)

Verlena S. Walker September 3, 2014 at 11:14 PM Superlative Justin. Very beautifully written and enjoyed. Verlena Justin Bordner September 4, 2014 at 2:14 AM It is an honor to have the word superlative applied to this romance Verlena, thank you! J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A September 3, 2014 at 8:44 PM Justin, this is a mighty fine poem. I am happy for you, and this warrior gal, who hungers your eyes. Every one is cut deep, some deeper than others. However, I'm surprised you are still seduced by that perfume. LINDA Justin Bordner September 3, 2014 at 11:10 PM The intimacy of this poem revolves around the Goddess relieving the strain of the warrior, understanding and healing his cuts, and he in turn treating her wound. Warriors are defined not by their cut, or by how many they have, rather from how they bleed...this poem speaks to your heart...you are a great warrior woman Linda...J.A.B.

Carolyn Devonshire September 3, 2014 at 7:29 AM Wow! this is an amazing love poem, Justin. How wonderful it must be never to see your loved one aging, only a timeless beauty in the moonlight. People we truly love never seem to grow old. Love, Carolyn Justin Bordner September 3, 2014 at 1:56 PM Your wisdom is so elegant Carolyn. Her beauty is limitless...J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2014 at 4:42 AM - Oh .. bliss in every shade, smell and color .... I love it, Justin ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Justin Bordner September 3, 2014 at 1:38 PM Yeah Anne, take it to every level! J.A.B.

Earl Schumacker September 3, 2014 at 2:14 AM Hi Justin, Nicely done as usual. This has interesting images and is a very solid accomplishment with merit. Very powerful, strong and potent. Did I mention by chance that I liked it? Have a great day. Earl Justin Bordner September 3, 2014 at 1:35 PM A warrior pursuing an irresistible touch of magic Earl. I'm happy that my style invigorates your imagination. Thanx for the encouragement. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian September 3, 2014 at 1:59 AM Perfume can be intoxicating, Justin. My signature scent...Elie Saab (the perfume). I LOVE it. It is floral and heady...but OH SO SWEET. Just like this poem of yours. It is absolutely stunning. Wonderful write...You just go from glory to glory. Eileen Manassian September 3, 2014 at 9:07 AM Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.... Justin Bordner September 3, 2014 at 2:12 AM There is a perfume to your eyes as well, warm and sweet. Thrilled you relish this desert romance Eileen, deserts are so extreme yet enchanting and makes a perfect landscape for this sensuous, and remote intimacy. I go from passion to glory, glory to passion, its a warrior way. Your visits strengthen me...J.A.B.