Perfume

Your cologne, your pheromone have just blown 
over me.  Now my testosterone 
leaves me dying to do 
all of those things for you 
I do in your erogenous zone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Austin Avatar
January 7, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Howdy, John. Powerful stuff cologne, women. Enjoyed on a carnal level. daver
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 10:35 PM
more poems more poems. Unless you can think of one of yours I haven't seen yet??
Horne Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 3:21 PM
LOL, witty write : )
Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2012 at 4:16 PM
Passionate work..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 9:01 PM
Hey, john, just stopping by to say hi. I am taking a long time to see comments. That's what happens when I miss one day! But I enjoy it anyway. LUv, Andrea
Pettit Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 11:02 PM
That's the first time I ever saw a limerick constructed that way. Your description and rhyming are quite impressive here.
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 1:44 PM
john, this is cute as can be. But you chose a word or two next to impossible for a limerick beat (I know you like to know those things!) Actually it comes off rather nicely metered. LInes 3 and 4 are excellent for the beat. It was sure nice to catch you here today. I'm finally going off now. The chiro killed my neck. He cracked it when it was already feeling JUST FINE. So I think I'll lie down and just watch tv.
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