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Perfume

Your cologne, your pheromone have just blown 
over me.  Now my testosterone 
leaves me dying to do 
all of those things for you 
I do in your erogenous zone.

Copyright © John Smith | Year Posted 2011

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Daver Austin Date: 1/7/2012 1:17:00 PM Howdy, John. Powerful stuff cologne, women. Enjoyed on a carnal level. daver Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/6/2012 10:35:00 PM more poems more poems. Unless you can think of one of yours I haven't seen yet?? Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 1/4/2012 3:21:00 PM LOL, witty write : ) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/3/2012 4:16:00 PM Passionate work..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/2/2012 9:01:00 PM Hey, john, just stopping by to say hi. I am taking a long time to see comments. That's what happens when I miss one day! But I enjoy it anyway. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 12/30/2011 11:02:00 PM That's the first time I ever saw a limerick constructed that way. Your description and rhyming are quite impressive here. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/30/2011 1:44:00 PM john, this is cute as can be. But you chose a word or two next to impossible for a limerick beat (I know you like to know those things!) Actually it comes off rather nicely metered. LInes 3 and 4 are excellent for the beat. It was sure nice to catch you here today. I'm finally going off now. The chiro killed my neck. He cracked it when it was already feeling JUST FINE. So I think I'll lie down and just watch tv. Login to Reply