Perfectly Breakable

Mother buried hacked-up carp beneath 
pink rose mallow. She knew the filthy cats 
would come. A balled-up dirty rag 
and coffee tin of smelly kerosene 
were garrisoned behind a red berry twistwood. 
Mother would hide in a column of shadow 
near the porch. Ambush the cats as they dug 
for carp. Their noses spiced with fish-oiled peat. 
Tails flagged above puckered targets. 
Mother was quick with her kerosene rag — spot on! 
A hush-hush tripwire stretched taut round 
the perimeter of mother’s mortared desperation. 
The sacrosanct, lint-free, perfect world, where 
she demanded God wipe His feet at her door. 
Dear Mother, our Elizabeth Taylor dead ringer, 
who could waltz with kings, or gut them with a glare. 
Ghetto mother, who would murder to keep 
her suburbs white, the cat crap gone, and 
her prize mallow big as Frisbees. I couldn’t 
let it storm on mother. She would get crazy 
if her galvanized tin-roof mind was rattled. 
Her daughter always had to shine. I kept 
the attic window shutters well oiled. Mother 
never heard my bare feet crisscrossing 
the roof, as I ran to catch the rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 17, 2012 at 1:40 PM
Time for a new piece of poetry Claire. I await your reentry into the Soup. Love, Carol
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December 19, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Claire. Love and blessings, Carol
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August 2, 2011 at 3:07 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Claire. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2011 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Claire. Love, Carol
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May 30, 2011 at 6:20 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Claire
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