Perfectionist

There was this keen perfectionist named Jack,
each night before starting to stride the track
he’d enter the bathroom
to diligently groom,
return to see she’d by then hit the sack.

August 30, 2020
Syllable count : 10/10/6/6/10
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Contest : Limerick Fun
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Krutsinger Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 3:55 AM
I like this fun limerick, and clean too! Nicely done!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 5:11 AM
Thank you, Caren.
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