Brian Davey Poet Quatrain

Perfect World--Contest

Perfect World 
  (If You Could Change The World) 
                      contest




    If I could change the world
        I really wouldn't change a thing
            Because a choice that makes me happy
                might cause other people suffering

    We are all the same but different
        Everyone has individuality
            So leave these matters to God
                and just pray spiritually

    Yes the world has problems
        Hunger, war, pain, and strife
            But to take away all the suffering
                Would remove the true meaning of life

    So if I could change the world
        I choose to leave it all the same
            This world Is only His creation
                Do you really want to play that game?


                                04/13/2016

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Wendy Rycroft April 24, 2016 at 3:56 AM a good poem with good morals xxxx Brian Davey May 21, 2016 at 4:55 AM Thank you Wendy

Barbara Gorelick April 13, 2016 at 9:44 AM Like your take on this...well written. BG Brian Davey April 13, 2016 at 11:53 AM thank you so much Barbara I appreciate it

Sarita Milliner April 13, 2016 at 8:51 AM Brian, I like your take on life and your creativity through this write. Good luck in the contest!! Brian Davey April 13, 2016 at 11:52 AM thank you so much

Jan Allison April 13, 2016 at 6:33 AM Unique take on the theme Brian:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Jan Allison April 13, 2016 at 7:05 AM I often go out on a limb with my contest entries and have about 100 N/A to my name lol - you win some and lose some but the important thing is you are unleashing your creativity:-) hugs Jan xx Brian Davey April 13, 2016 at 7:03 AM This was one of those going out on a limb things we talked of once. I know its not really what he is looking for but I think it will be the only one of its kind. Thanks for reading Jan