Alkas Poetry Poet Free verse

Perfect Understanding

I comprehend the wind when
                      your hair dangles ...
                      is when you say yes
                      for me !
                      I comprise the sun when
                       everything goes off and in darkness,
                       when i perceive your fiery look
                       sublimating me!
                       I understand the rain when
                       shed your grateful tears
                       wetting me with emotion!
                       I realize then that
                       the storm,
                       it's just the
                       most vibrant
                       manifestation
                       of our love ...!

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Darlene De Beaulieu September 3, 2020 at 3:44 PM Hello Alakas Poetry, I just read this poem. Oh-wow! This very romantic. I do like the first line.It speaks to me. Where it says I realizethen that the storm and to the end of the poem captures the mood in this poem. Salute Darlene xxxx-oooo Darlene De Beaulieu September 5, 2020 at 11:43 AM Hello Alakas Poetry, Yes i have enjoyed this poem. I thank you for this lovely comment. I will fav, this poem. Salute Darlene xxxx-oooo. Alkas Poetry September 3, 2020 at 5:08 PM I feel extremely glad that you enjoyed this poem, i wrote this with all my sentimental feelings... a sensible person is capable of capturing the meaning of this, and you did... thanks you and your pretty heart... xxxxxooooo salute alkas

Panagiota Romios September 3, 2020 at 4:14 AM Such a romantic you are...I must FAV this, as I, also am a romantic. All the lines are great. The first line grabbed my soul...I was lost Salute, Panagiota xx Alkas Poetry September 3, 2020 at 11:49 AM Dear Panagiota. nothing wrong being romantic...emotions are part of our connection with superiors important is to be grabbed to our souls... salute alkas