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I comprehend the wind when your hair dangles ... is when you say yes for me ! I comprise the sun when everything goes off and in darkness, when i perceive your fiery look sublimating me! I understand the rain when shed your grateful tears wetting me with emotion! I realize then that the storm, it's just the most vibrant manifestation of our love ...!

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Date: 9/3/2020 3:44:00 PM
Hello Alakas Poetry, I just read this poem. Oh-wow! This very romantic. I do like the first line.It speaks to me. Where it says I realizethen that the storm and to the end of the poem captures the mood in this poem. Salute Darlene xxxx-oooo
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/5/2020 11:43:00 AM
Hello Alakas Poetry, Yes i have enjoyed this poem. I thank you for this lovely comment. I will fav, this poem. Salute Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Alkas Poetry
Date: 9/3/2020 5:08:00 PM
I feel extremely glad that you enjoyed this poem, i wrote this with all my sentimental feelings... a sensible person is capable of capturing the meaning of this, and you did... thanks you and your pretty heart... xxxxxooooo salute alkas
Date: 9/3/2020 4:14:00 AM
Such a romantic you are...I must FAV this, as I, also am a romantic. All the lines are great. The first line grabbed my soul...I was lost Salute, Panagiota xx
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Alkas Poetry
Date: 9/3/2020 11:49:00 AM
Dear Panagiota. nothing wrong being romantic...emotions are part of our connection with superiors important is to be grabbed to our souls... salute alkas

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