Perfect Story

The Perfect Story!!

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ingredients.... How to write the perfect story?

 

Tonight I close my eyes, enter the realm in another form

Dig deep inside to find the ingredients for you~ "the Perfect Story?"

Find the enigma behind every expression of beauty

Locate the inspiration of the world  your heart seeks

Take your mind deep and far beyond every star

Position my thought with the best ingredients,

that afflicts the unique worlds only I experienced

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First add the ingredient of self-attitude. ( POSITIVE )

Next unlock the skills that hold the masterpiece 

Exercise the role of timing, when setting the perfect line

Find a sidekick to help intervene every step without falling

Meet and bond with every word that makes the story unique

Feel the motion in both hands, while perceiving every step

Show off the ability that one can see more than others

Provide the details that feed the readers appetite

Hold a form of originality, impressing the readers imagination

Last create a mystery like no other, evoke the reads curiosity

"TO WANT MORE!"
Wait a second, you asked for A Story, 
Not, my inventory!!! 

:)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A  Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:08 PM
perfect part two
A. Sharma Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:41 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Linda! Loved to read today amazing words of wisdom!
A  Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:39 AM
LOL, I remember this challenge. What ever happened to mine. SKAT
A   Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 11:17 AM
Thank you so much ROB.... wow....I was not expecting to be on your list... :) LINDA
Davis Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 9:59 PM
PD Such a creative and intriguing write. One that would be great if it happened this easily. Thanks for the nice comment on my Starting Again poem.
Carrillo Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 9:21 PM
I think it would be perfect if it could be done. I love the last line. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Sims Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 4:42 PM
Excellent very interesting. You caught my eye.
Jones Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 12:44 AM
chill, get real, and all that jazz... is a game and a warzone all the same.
Gupta Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 2:41 PM
real masterpiece...really admiring
Sweetheart Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 3:24 PM
OK PD my BFF I have completed my 13 lines for my part of the collaboration with u.. am sooooo excited and hope u like my part luv.. going to try to fit it in a soup mail now.. so watch for it.. luv always your BFF... not going to post my part yet..will wait for u luv..
Pemberton Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 3:58 AM
Quite interesting and thought provoking!
Frayer Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 4:47 PM
Well you have definitely gained my curiosity, that is with out a doubt the appropriate way to a great write. Well done, good luck with all future writing~Virginia
Falotico Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 1:22 PM
Another well written piece from a creative yet mysterious mind( I know~continue~) always Michael
Bailey Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 1:31 PM
Very creative! I enjoyed reading.
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 11:18 PM
pd. I would not consider the Rabbit Hole a low budget movie. It was very recently released in the theater. some of the best movies start out at indies theaters, like Black Swan and american Beauty, and king's speech, all becoming Oscar nominees! What good movies have you seen lately?
Falotico Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 6:48 AM
Soup Mail my dear.....
Locksley Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 11:48 AM
We always want to leave the reader wanting more. Nice poem.
Duffin Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 4:40 AM
Hi DP. A fantastic way that you have crafted this beautiful piece. I am envious of your ability. Eamon
Kapoor Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 5:55 AM
Superb, matchless and unique. This is really a great write from your beautiful pen my friend. One of the best gems created by you so far. I really love the way you have developed this theme. I would place it as my fav. as well my friend. I have placed a new Kawaali on a new theme hope you would like it. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra....Poet D
Tate Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 6:44 AM
Wow! Destroyer, this may be your magnum opus. Great job indeed. Glad I dropped by to enjoy the read. Thanks for your nice comments on my Mystery of the Shoe. I had fun with that one. Also take a look at Poet's Narcissus James
Whitlock-Ishway Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 11:45 AM
More, always more P.D.! Missed ya for the past week and my appetite has been filled. Beauty of a write as always! Lay
Trevino Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 2:01 PM
your just too much for me lol, I have no idea how your mind creates awesomeness like this, I love it!! :), always Royal^.^
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 3:08 PM
JUst stopping by to say HI!
Maverick Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 10:02 AM
exercise the role of timing.. P D, my only advice here is..just don't inflict on it heat exaustion..you certainly seem motivated enough to! ha ha, by the way enjoyed.
Horsman Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 10:01 PM
what a wonderful recipe, p.d, yes please i would like More! enjoyed this. Harry
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