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Perfect Perfume

exquisite white blossom bathing in the sun scents of spring cross my path

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Cecil Hickman

Date: 3/22/2009 9:57:00 AM

very well descibed to which the aroma of this piece is brought out for all to smell and enjoy,,Thank you for reading my work and especially for suppying the motives for me and others to write for the contests you hold,,blessings..Cecil

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/21/2009 11:45:00 PM

A perfect moment described so well. Nice job Brian...Raul

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/20/2009 10:44:00 AM

Perfect Haiku for this first day of Spring, Brian! Lovely and fragrant images. Love, Robin

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/20/2009 8:23:00 AM

This is a brilliant Haiku brother..all three lines jumps off the page..well done.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2009 7:11:00 AM

Your haiku brings life to the flowers, Brian! You always execute your message in perfect structure and exquisite images.

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/20/2009 6:37:00 AM

Makes one want to take a deep breath! Another beautiful way to begin the day! ~ ....Thanks always for you kind comments, Brian! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/20/2009 5:44:00 AM

Sheer delight. This is cheering me up as it is actually snowing here this first Spring morning. Love, Shar

Amy Swanson

Date: 3/20/2009 5:25:00 AM

What a beautiful haiku... so soft and just as exquisite! :) Lovely thoughts for first thing in the morning. Love, Amy

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/20/2009 4:39:00 AM

Super picture , Brian . I passed it , on my way to work , this morning . Do believe the "cherry" is next for blossom ?? ... Anyway , it beats the asss off " Lifeboy" !! ..

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/20/2009 4:15:00 AM

Flavored and rich, I see her nakedness in light and all the freshness of the bath. Keep having fun.

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 3/20/2009 3:25:00 AM

a beautiful combination of aromas here, what's the brand name? I like it. Déirdre

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/20/2009 1:49:00 AM

Yummy. the only scent to cross my path here tight now, is dog poo atop the melting snow. now so hot. ;) love, Kristin

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/20/2009 1:31:00 AM

Not sure what your white blossoms are but my aunt has a huge home in the country. She would put a couple of magnolias in a vase in the center of the home and the whole house would be filled with smiles and the frangrance of magnolias

Farah Chamma

Date: 3/20/2009 1:18:00 AM

That's beautiful.. so simply... Farah