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Perfect In Every Way

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Envious
   of your overt beauty,
      Venus hides her face amongst the stars

Ascending
   night's ebony mountain,
      Luna's light pales next to your aura

Retreating
   shadows morph into night, 
      the universe twinkling in your eyes

Exquisite
   as any masterpiece,
      God made you perfect in every way


(Parallelogram de Crystalline)


2/20/2021


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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/7/2021 6:14:00 AM
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very well crafted......I like the parallels.. Congratulations on first place.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/7/2021 7:21:00 AM
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Thanks Janis, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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Joseph May
Date: 3/15/2021 5:09:00 AM
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Very nicely penned Emile, Congrats on your win..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/15/2021 1:10:00 PM
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Thanks Joseph, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/20/2021 6:31:00 PM
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Lovely poem, beautifully expressed in just the perfect words. Looks like you'll be a winner in the contest, surely!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/21/2021 7:41:00 AM
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Thanks L, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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