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Perfect Beauty

Perfect beauty I gaze upon the loveliness of the dawning sun glistening in your hair, that new sun dress you were so excited about softly flowing in the warm breeze, geraniums blooming on a terra cotta veranda, vibrant red against a morning glory sky, a sparkling mimosa in your hand as pelicans float silently above melodic aqua marine waves... then as you see me, your mesmerizing smile reminds me that perfect beauty is what I see every morning with you Good morning Soupers

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Funom Makama

Date: 3/6/2017 10:58:00 AM

This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.

Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2017 12:12:00 PM

Thank you so very much for your kindness. I appreciate your visit.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/3/2017 1:53:00 PM

Hi Chris. Entries such as this is why we read and why we follow the path of what we call poetry. Just know this is marvelous and timeless. Well done

Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2017 12:12:00 PM

Thank you so very much Lisa. Sorry for the late reply, I must have missed this comment. I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave such nice thoughts on my poetry

Tim Smith

Date: 3/3/2017 9:56:00 AM

Sets the stage for a glorious day.

Chris Green
Date: 3/3/2017 11:05:00 AM

Thanks so very much Tim.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/3/2017 8:25:00 AM

How beautiful ..How beautiful this is... Do you celebrate women's day over there on the 8th of March?Do you give mimosa on thatday to the ladies there? :)..Loved your poem.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/3/2017 9:55:00 AM

You made me smile..I do love mimosa. :)

Chris Green
Date: 3/3/2017 9:44:00 AM

Not that I know of but I love to celebrate beautiful women every day. Would care for a mimosa? :) Thanks so very much my sweet friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/3/2017 7:31:00 AM

My mind's eye is mesmerized by the beauty of the images your poem so masterfully paints! Excellent dear, Chris. A seven!

Chris Green
Date: 3/3/2017 9:43:00 AM

I am happy it is my friend. Thank you for your nice comments always Demetrios.

John Hamilton

Date: 3/3/2017 7:24:00 AM

Where are you that you see pelicans? We spent days watching them in Cuba last year on vacation, they are a marvel. As usual a lovely poem full of imagery. Good morning to you!

Chris Green
Date: 3/3/2017 9:42:00 AM

Good morning John. They are a common site on the Texas coast. Thanks for your kind thoughts

Darren White

Date: 3/3/2017 6:24:00 AM

Wow, what lovely image... I can see her with that dress and flowers. I love mimosa... Good morning Chris, time for my coffee :)

Chris Green
Date: 3/3/2017 9:41:00 AM

Good morning Darren. Thanks so very much my friend.