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love has to be perfect in each and every way love cannot hesitate while eyes watch and wait love should be original spontaneous and surprise love should be truthful not tainted with lies love should be monogamous that means one on one love is full of sacrifices each one nobley done love should be forever and never not die love should show it's jealousy to it's loved ones eye's love is certianly the reason of why someone cries love should be a comfort always near by

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Date: 2/15/2013 4:31:00 AM
amazing flow..deep message :-)
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Date: 10/4/2012 3:57:00 PM
great sentiment and poetry
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Date: 10/3/2012 6:39:00 AM
Hey John. nice poem, enjoyed the flow - Shaz
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Date: 9/28/2012 5:13:00 PM
yet when you find originality you try to mould it into conventionality!
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John Loving Iii
Date: 9/28/2012 8:12:00 PM
Now that's poetry.
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The Situation
Date: 9/28/2012 6:02:00 PM
Their tied together.
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 9/28/2012 5:15:00 PM
but I prefer this side of you to the banging-on-about-religion one
Date: 9/27/2012 1:22:00 PM
A perfect..ly love-ly poem about perfect love! Terry
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Date: 9/27/2012 1:04:00 PM
Awesome piece written here! Just imagine if this world was actually "perfect."..I would stay in love..lol
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