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Perdition

In tears that feign to be a slave with deeds That mourn my life and ousts the face of peace These sad bells ring with cries for now I grieve And bow my head because I cannot cease I choose the weight of ton and gloom of ache To lay in watch to mark the clock rush slow The pang of rail, the strike of steel to take With one foot in the pit of grave songs woe The sun has but to trade the dark to light But lost and fixed its loft clings far too high As cold and cloud have barred such smiles from sight To breach this heart so meek with sad lost cries Bound and caged it has penned my last good bye To spare this heart in dread to spurn or die December 28, 2020 Addiction Poetry Contest Sponsored by Rob Levasseur N/A 1-18-1021

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Date: 5/8/2021 9:12:00 AM
Classical, poetic beauty rich with imagery illustrating pain of passing whether in a final goodbye or in one of life's moments of passing, Lonna. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/7/2021 11:22:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/7/2021 10:35:00 PM
Many are lost and condemned, shackled to their weaknesses as dependency overwhelms, vulnerable, and helpless. Passionately executed, Lonna, truly remarkable. My gratitude for your participation, and my compliments on your well-deserved placement my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 1/12/2021 11:39:00 PM
Dark and deep, this is a masterful account of being enslaved to an unmentioned addiction. I love reading your writing, dear Lonna, you obviously write from the heart, but with a head that guides exactly how to choose the right words. I love the line 'The sun has but to trade the dark to light', so original and effective in painting the right scene. A fave for me. Enjoy your day my friend ~ John
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John Watt
Date: 1/14/2021 8:58:00 PM
The feeling is mutual, my friend. You are greatly appreciated.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 1/14/2021 11:43:00 AM
Dear poet friend, I cannot tell you how important your comments become. You truly understand my words and I so appreciate it. Lonna

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