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Traditional Cinquain contest, Sponsor: Sotto Poet

Perception of Affection

the kiss
amorous twist
the primal beauty of
two perfect sensual figures
let’s French

bouquet
the scent of love
blossoms through honeymoon
in a year’s time, single dried rose
trace whiff

a peck
on routine lips
smudge of dust on collar
she’s expecting watermelon
and nags

kids quip
as parents meet
still they’re content with sweet
a practiced way to hug and kiss
all’s right

scrapbook
memories rise
like a kite in true wind
for it’s all that and in between 
oh  WOW!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 11:45 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Perception of Affection" write again.  Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 1:03 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Poteet Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 7:06 AM
To the core, I'll add my congratulations. You leave no doubt in anyone's mind of the many ways to show affection at all levels. Thanks for sharing.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 7:50 AM
Thank you, dear one!
Loving Iii Avatar
January 27, 2026 at 12:27 PM
This is the way It should be. And is for some. You addressed it well.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2026 at 3:06 PM
Thank you, John!
Rolland Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 5:04 PM
brilliant poetry, le baiser dans tous ses états, dear poet, you touched my soul, blessings
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2026 at 3:11 PM
un baiser qui résiste à l'épreuve du temps…merci
Kauffman Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 11:36 AM
Hi Kim! I love the chronological order as you tell the story of two lovers from meeting through maturity! Wonderful imagery. The scrapbook verse is a brilliant ending. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings and warm hugs!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2026 at 3:13 PM
Thank you kindly, Sam! I appreciate you!
Poet Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 6:41 AM
This poem is both original and excellent. The title is perfect, and the poem is superbly written.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 11:30 AM
Wow! Thank you so much!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 2:16 AM
Oh my! Now, ain't that sweet and romantic?
Rodrigues Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 11:29 AM
Thanks, Victor!
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 12:12 AM
A WOW poem too. You thought of such a great way to do this challenge.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 11:29 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Daniel Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 7:15 AM
You've created a beautiful story based on the sculpture, lovely work, Kim:)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 10:58 AM
Thank you, Joanna! :)
May Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 2:09 AM
Very nicely crafted Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 5:28 AM
Thanks, Joseph!
Croft Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 1:16 AM
Very nice. Good luck in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 5:28 AM
Thank you, Karen!
Wolf Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 8:05 PM
Interesting angle on kisses there, Kim. ~ Hur Shis
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 9:19 PM
Thank you!
Hind Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 3:10 PM
Very sweet :) like the part about in a year's time
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 5:30 PM
Thank you! I remember my sister, who married older, was clinging to the honeymoon stage…we could see it was over…lol
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 1:58 PM
well done, KIm! I especially liked: scrapbook memories rise like a kite
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 5:31 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Cunningham Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 12:31 PM
You captured it beautifully Kim. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 12:48 PM
Thank you, Tom! I appreciate it!
DiMino Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 11:26 AM
I guess, the typical journey for most of us. Poetry exonerates. Thank God!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 12:49 PM
I think you’re right. Love is the totality.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 12:48 PM
I think you’re right. Love is the totality.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 9:23 AM
"Perception of Affection" is a wonderful write. What a great picture you have here. "Good Luck" I did "Living Without A Loved One. Have a fun day writing away.............
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 12:49 PM
Thank you, Paula xx
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