Penultimate Sky

What is life?
but a clutching for dear life 
to a  cotton ball dipped in sweet nectar
a wounded butterfly grasps, 
finally able to drink his measure
sugar rushing to it's wings, it looks
 somehow stronger, prouder
ready to face it's brief existance, 
for whatever it may be worth
for what is a butterflys life
if not soaring through a penultimate sky, 
admired by all, propagating, migrating 
part of a long chain of successions
 toward the North, and once again returning
for what purpose, only it's creator knows
perhaps only to lift the spirits of it's beholder.
Does a butterfly have to soar and flutter
to be part of life's penultimate cycle
even if struggling to pull itself to the highest branch, 
and gaze upon the world, to which it emerged?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/9/2018 7:05:00 AM
Wow... this is so philosophical and wonderfully expressed...Great use of metaphor at the end...
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Date: 12/9/2018 12:57:00 AM
Butterflies are very beautiful creatures that people look upon with admiration. Their short life spans remind us that physical beauty doesn't last forever, but the joy they give to admirers is wondrous. This is lovely DS. Have we met before? Your writing style is unique and compelling. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 12/9/2018 3:06:00 AM
Yes, I think we have. You have persuaded me to continue and I have followed your advice and read your work over the years,, thank you!
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