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Pensive Walk

Pensive Walk Autumn winds are sorting; Some limbs this day are cracking, falling, While there are those that split and cling Green cored, they do not break but bend. And I will walk and walk and shuffle Through wooded leaf cushioned paths, Believing these will be seen again where Tall cannas, sunflowers, sleep in depths waiting. Yes, I will walk, I will breath, Agog at jeweled leaves with supernatural hope, That we will meet again On the other side of Winter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/28/2017 5:15:00 PM
such a reflective poem lit by your wonderful artwords, sun... ohh, i sigh!...huggs
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/31/2017 6:46:00 PM
Nice things to say, Nette. Thank you!
Date: 10/28/2017 12:52:00 PM
Oh...what an ending, dear. Love this stroll with you. Jeweled leaves always speak to the heart and mind. Hugs
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/31/2017 6:45:00 PM
Love your writing, and appreciate you reading mine!
Date: 10/27/2017 8:46:00 PM
But Autumn is such a wonderful time of the year, I love to walk in this weather, cool, crisp, and beautifully wondrous! I like Spring, but it brings with it the beginning of Summer, bad for me, too hot! I like Autumn better for Winter comes after and that doesn't bother me! I really enjoyed reading your ingenious and well thought out write here my friend! You have masterfully written a grandiose piece, Great work!!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/31/2017 6:43:00 PM
I appreciate your encouragement, Russell.
Date: 10/27/2017 7:52:00 PM
As you say, there is someone on the other side of winter--I feel the autumn's pensive walk along your path!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/31/2017 6:43:00 PM
Thank you - I wonder who that will be?

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