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Penny Paramours

"Penny Paramours" tossed copper penny into wishing well tingling sound splashing into water of dreams envisioned eagerly a vivid magic spell creating cherished visual delight in themes. tingling sound splashing into water of dreams radiate emotions as penny cascades creating cherised visual delight in themes bright as sunbeams in orange marmalade. radiate emotions as penny cascades vibrant romance escalates to love bright as sunbeams in orange marmalade two hearts entwine to pair of turtledoves. vibrant romance escalates to love tossed copper penny into wishing well two hearts entwine to pair of turtledoves envisioned eagerly as vivid magic spell. *Rhyming Pantoum Sequence: ABAB BCBC CDCD DADA *For Rhonda and Cyndi's Penny Pantoum Contest. *August 30, 2012.

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Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 2:37:00 AM

Well expressed, emotions ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/26/2012 5:31:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in Rhonda and Cyndi's "Penny Pantoums" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/25/2012 4:47:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/25/2012 3:06:00 PM

extraordinary pantoum that delights the heart, sweets... big congrats!!.. how's the family and new grandson?..:) huggs!

Kash Poet

Date: 9/25/2012 12:04:00 PM

A beautiful Pantoum here Linda!Congrats on your win in the contest.

Len Gasun

Date: 9/25/2012 9:54:00 AM

Excellent write and a well-deserved winning piece!!! My huge hearty congratulations my dear Linda- M!!!! big hugs:) Leonora

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/25/2012 8:47:00 AM

WON 9TH PLACE ... THANKXXX

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/25/2012 1:36:00 AM

Congratulations Linda Marie, and a well deserved win xx

Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/5/2012 10:56:00 PM

I love the imagery,,,,, you said it sister,,,,, all these things go thru your mind when you toss that coin ;}

Joy Wellington

Date: 9/4/2012 9:23:00 AM

Give you any topic and you will create a love story from it LM...you are so wired with love energy...it seems to me, for you, love overcomes all. I like that about you. Thanks for visits and comments. One love and best wishes in this contest! Joy Wells

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/3/2012 5:45:00 AM

Great images in this excellent piece... its wonderful to start my day reading you.. love n hugs Michael

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/1/2012 3:29:00 PM

Been there done that, only wish i could write a poem about it as good as this. wonderful from you Sweetheart.

Jack Horne

Date: 9/1/2012 1:36:00 PM

awesome write, Linda-Marie. A sure winner - and congrats on your wins too : )

Constance La France

Date: 9/1/2012 12:13:00 PM

Hi Linda, what a beautiful Pantoum, just awesome and reading like a winner to me, congrats on all your wins and your beautiful writing. Hope you are feeling better, I am suppose to be going back to work soon but in a limited way, just to see if I can do it, we will see, I am hopeful, I am enjoying the contests and the site despite a few hate mails which I cannot fathom, oh well, some things never change or I should say people, do they sweetheart? Love Constance

Cindy Cayton

Date: 8/31/2012 1:23:00 PM

very fairytalish. It flows nicely and alot of good imagery Linda. Take care and God bless, Cindy

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/31/2012 7:45:00 AM

Wow, you have done excellently with this incredible write my friend! I am so very impressed with how you wrote this delightful poem! I only wish I could write something as wonderful as this masterful write! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2012 5:47:00 AM

......"There is no idea to call the fire truck, when two hearts set on fire " - - - Lovely Linda-Marie. Winning luck to you! Have a lovely weekend with your loved ones. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2012 5:32:00 AM

Winning entry for sure..Interesting contest..I will have to check it out..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind review was encouraging..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/31/2012 12:15:00 AM

Hello, Linda, my bff... First I'm gonna tell you, that I miss your blogs. Hope to see one from you soon.. About your poem. I like tossing pennies with the hopes, they are not tossed out.. one time i wished for the man i was in love with to be mine.. now..look.. Nathan, moved all the way from Oregon to Texas, to be with me. How romantic, like the vision in your poem. Good luck..always~PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/30/2012 11:00:00 PM

oh how many of us have tossed pennies into a wishing well in hopes of finding love poets? well.. it works.. so enjoy with luv ..happy holiday weekend .. be safe.. have fun ..