Linda-Marie Sweetheart Poet Pantoum

Penny Paramours

    "Penny Paramours"

tossed copper penny into wishing well
tingling sound splashing into water of dreams
envisioned eagerly a vivid magic spell
creating cherished visual delight in themes.

tingling sound splashing into water of dreams
radiate emotions as penny cascades
creating cherised visual delight in themes
bright as sunbeams in orange marmalade.

radiate emotions as penny cascades
vibrant romance escalates to love
bright as sunbeams in orange marmalade
two hearts entwine to pair of turtledoves.

vibrant romance escalates to love
tossed copper penny into wishing well
two hearts entwine to pair of turtledoves
envisioned eagerly as vivid magic spell.

*Rhyming Pantoum Sequence: ABAB BCBC CDCD DADA 

*For Rhonda and Cyndi's Penny Pantoum Contest.
*August 30, 2012. 

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Skat A March 13, 2014 at 2:37 AM Well expressed, emotions ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Carol Sunshine Brown September 26, 2012 at 5:31 AM A belated congratulations on your win in Rhonda and Cyndi's "Penny Pantoums" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick September 25, 2012 at 4:47 PM Congrats on your win..Sara

Nette Onclaud September 25, 2012 at 3:06 PM extraordinary pantoum that delights the heart, sweets... big congrats!!.. how's the family and new grandson?..:) huggs!

Kash Poet September 25, 2012 at 12:04 PM A beautiful Pantoum here Linda!Congrats on your win in the contest.

Len Gasun September 25, 2012 at 9:54 AM Excellent write and a well-deserved winning piece!!! My huge hearty congratulations my dear Linda- M!!!! big hugs:) Leonora

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 25, 2012 at 8:47 AM WON 9TH PLACE ... THANKXXX

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 25, 2012 at 1:36 AM Congratulations Linda Marie, and a well deserved win xx

Debbie Duncan September 5, 2012 at 10:56 PM I love the imagery,,,,, you said it sister,,,,, all these things go thru your mind when you toss that coin ;}

Joy Wellington September 4, 2012 at 9:23 AM Give you any topic and you will create a love story from it LM...you are so wired with love energy...it seems to me, for you, love overcomes all. I like that about you. Thanks for visits and comments. One love and best wishes in this contest! Joy Wells

Michael J. Falotico September 3, 2012 at 5:45 AM Great images in this excellent piece... its wonderful to start my day reading you.. love n hugs Michael

Harry Horsman September 1, 2012 at 3:29 PM Been there done that, only wish i could write a poem about it as good as this. wonderful from you Sweetheart.

Jack Horne September 1, 2012 at 1:36 PM awesome write, Linda-Marie. A sure winner - and congrats on your wins too : )

Constance La France September 1, 2012 at 12:13 PM Hi Linda, what a beautiful Pantoum, just awesome and reading like a winner to me, congrats on all your wins and your beautiful writing. Hope you are feeling better, I am suppose to be going back to work soon but in a limited way, just to see if I can do it, we will see, I am hopeful, I am enjoying the contests and the site despite a few hate mails which I cannot fathom, oh well, some things never change or I should say people, do they sweetheart? Love Constance

Cindy Cayton August 31, 2012 at 1:23 PM very fairytalish. It flows nicely and alot of good imagery Linda. Take care and God bless, Cindy

Russell Sivey August 31, 2012 at 7:45 AM Wow, you have done excellently with this incredible write my friend! I am so very impressed with how you wrote this delightful poem! I only wish I could write something as wonderful as this masterful write! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 31, 2012 at 5:47 AM ......"There is no idea to call the fire truck, when two hearts set on fire " - - - Lovely Linda-Marie. Winning luck to you! Have a lovely weekend with your loved ones. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick August 31, 2012 at 5:32 AM Winning entry for sure..Interesting contest..I will have to check it out..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind review was encouraging..Sara

Poet Destroyer A August 31, 2012 at 12:15 AM Hello, Linda, my bff... First I'm gonna tell you, that I miss your blogs. Hope to see one from you soon.. About your poem. I like tossing pennies with the hopes, they are not tossed out.. one time i wished for the man i was in love with to be mine.. now..look.. Nathan, moved all the way from Oregon to Texas, to be with me. How romantic, like the vision in your poem. Good luck..always~PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 30, 2012 at 11:00 PM oh how many of us have tossed pennies into a wishing well in hopes of finding love poets? well.. it works.. so enjoy with luv ..happy holiday weekend .. be safe.. have fun ..