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Penny for the Guy

On a cold autumn eve, playful fingers tangled, soft and shy. The smell of hot chestnuts wafted through the milling crowd, a promise of comfort and warmth. We watched, you and I, the skies explode as rockets declared their secret desires. Catherine wheels danced a dizzying response while the bang of crackerjacks echoed, spilling smoke quick into the night. "Penny for the guy?", they cried. Sparklers lit, searching lips, the most tender touch. We kissed, my heart reflected in your eyes.
Date: 25.11.2016 *There is no category for a double etheree that I could see.

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Date: 4/15/2017 1:11:00 AM
A perfect description of a wonderful fireworks display with a romantic twist. Yes, watching them with a lover is so much more beautiful and memorable. Love this. A FAV for sure. And, congrats on your placement, Leileah.
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Date: 4/13/2017 7:33:00 AM
so lovely to read this again:-) Congrats on your win Leileah:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/12/2017 10:39:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest and congrats!
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Date: 12/1/2016 3:44:00 AM
nice, etheree (double) that fits the prompt well. Congrats on a fine piece of poetry.
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Leileah Kasperyan
Date: 12/2/2016 3:41:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Reason! X
Date: 11/30/2016 12:02:00 PM
what a wonderful form you used. Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Leileah Kasperyan
Date: 12/2/2016 3:40:00 AM
Thank you, Jan! Xx
Date: 11/30/2016 9:20:00 AM
lovely poem Leileah congrats on 3rd hugs
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Leileah Kasperyan
Date: 11/30/2016 9:33:00 AM
Aw thanks, that was very kind! hugs x
Date: 11/29/2016 7:20:00 AM
This was gorgeous, what a festive and fun scene you have created with your words. Nicely crafted as well, the shape adds wonderfully to the moment. And I love how it ended, that was so very beautiful.
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Leileah Kasperyan
Date: 11/29/2016 3:00:00 PM
If only all the Bonfire night fireworks ended like this ;) Thank you though!
Date: 11/26/2016 6:21:00 AM
Beautiful shape ... nice read ...
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Leileah Kasperyan
Date: 11/26/2016 6:36:00 AM
Thank you! The shape is the fun bit.