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Penning Consummate Rhyme

His descriptive phrases flow while compiling poetic verse 'cross pale parchment, the poet's pen continues to traverse Ink coursing like life blood rushing through his eddied veins ignoring sorely cramped fingers; generating echoed refrains Each stanza is arranged by sequence, in creation of a story Tho sometimes his mysterious muse runs wild with allegory then reins her in, allowing his mind to drift, floating in time Lost in imagination, he sits penning in consummate rhyme Thoughts drift like a flurry of snowflakes; his passion ignites as each completed line lifts his wizardry to greater heights In epic form he wanders with a level of verbose amplitude composing lyrical sonnets, describing a romantic interlude He indites with skill and talent of an accomplished musician striving to compose a magnum opus; a worthy composition and if his poetry is interpreted with eyes of fond admiration he gives credit to his witty muse for her invaluable inspiration

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Date: 12/4/2019 4:17:00 PM
Wow Lin I didn't know you had posted anything recently, this is stunning writing, I mean, cross pale parchment, eddied veins, verbose amplitude...absolutely stunning, I'm out of superlatives on this one. I have to fave this beauty...I wonder who you were describing...hmmm!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/4/2019 4:35:00 PM
I'm describing any poet/poetess who diligently and painstakingly seeks to scribe the ultimate rhyme. A brevity write or free verse does not always allow for the needed amount of demonstrative emotion. Your gracious commendations are always heartfelt, J.D. Thank you.
Date: 11/22/2019 10:17:00 AM
I can think of several who fit this description. I keep hoping some of their talent will rub off on me...as I hope yours does too. Nicely penned, Lin. All the best my friend. John
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/1/2019 9:28:00 AM
Sincere thanks for your time of reading and leaving gracious comments, John.
Date: 11/20/2019 8:03:00 PM
As always your poetry so deeply inspires me ! This is one of those magnificently wonderful creations that your immense poetry talents gifts to us. I have myself inked poetry for 50 years now and it is a great and gifted blessing to me.. As I am still learning more each and everyday! God bless,you and yours my friend. A fav, and a true gem..
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/1/2019 9:27:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind compliments, Robert.
Date: 11/17/2019 11:20:00 AM
This is great Lin, it could be about me lol...great to read you
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Date: 11/17/2019 1:49:00 PM
It could be you, Tim, so keep your passion for writing ignited. I'll be cruising for a week and will catch up on reading you when I return. Thanks for always being one of the first to read me and leave such kind remarks.