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Pennies From Heaven

The hands of twilight amble through glazed clouds Soothing my emptiness, a heart’s debris, Although one longtime wish rattles aloud Warm is the breeze that flutes in symphony. Soothing my emptiness, a heart’s debris, Ripples of time explore true north’s hourglass Warm is the breeze that flutes in symphony; As life seeks a reaping from time’s compass Ripples of time explore true north’s hourglass When in a gush, drizzles of kismet pour, As life seeks a reaping from time’s compass Oh, pennies from heaven open sky’s door! When in a gush, drizzles of kismet pour Drenching the thirst of love’s rebirth, joy flares; Oh, pennies from heaven open sky’s door, I taste once more a blooming warmth so rare. Drenching the thirst of love’s rebirth, joy flares; Although one crumpled wish rattles aloud; I taste once more a blooming warmth so rare. The hands of twilight, wander through glazed clouds . …….. .. * Oxford English Dictionary:’e. pennies from heaven: unexpected benefits; also (in sing.): a windfall, a godsend (rare). *A song, Pennies from Heaven, was composed in 1936---‘ don't you know each cloud contains pennies from heaven’… Rhonda and Cyndi’s Penny Pantoums Contest by nette onclaud

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Date: 9/27/2012 8:24:00 PM
Fantastic in every way. Sorry for taking soooo very long to get here. Stunning stuff. Though I loved all the lines, my favourite was Warm is the breeze that flutes in symphony...hugs to you... hope your allergies are still doing better. I just bought my detox kit (again) and I'm hoping to cleanse in two weeks. I'm crumbling right now... need to regear, recharge. xoxo Cyndi
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Date: 9/26/2012 9:25:00 AM
good look up! a well deserved win! congratulations :)
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Date: 9/26/2012 5:19:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Rhonda and Cyndi's "Penny Pantoums" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/25/2012 3:16:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 9/25/2012 11:16:00 AM
An amazing Pantoum here Nette!Congrats on your 2nd place win in the contest.
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Date: 9/25/2012 9:45:00 AM
CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON A SUPER 2ND PLACE WIN FOR SUPERB POETRY ..
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Date: 9/25/2012 7:24:00 AM
Congrats nette...a beauty...BG
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Date: 9/25/2012 1:01:00 AM
Congratulations nette, well done and a well deserved win xx
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Date: 9/20/2012 10:15:00 AM
another wonder from you, nette, your title, also a play on tv, written by Denis Potter one of my favourite author.
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Date: 8/25/2012 10:47:00 PM
I don't know the first thing about pantoums. I do know this is classy writing. Well done on this enjoyable piece, Nette. Best of luck to you in the contest. Fingers crossed. :)
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Date: 8/25/2012 8:25:00 AM
Lovely Pantonm here! Nice write!
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Date: 8/24/2012 5:51:00 AM
Nette luv u make writing look so easy with this hard form ..such an tense and beautiful piece.. I am always so amazed at the thoughts u create.. good luck.. so far I have eluded this challenge just for the form..oh.. my son and his wife on way home to have baby Sept. 22nd so I get to play Grandma again..so happy..hands r awful.. hope it goes soon.. oh..
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Date: 8/23/2012 10:14:00 PM
Your poem really captured the essence of that beautiful old fashioned song Pennies from heaven. your words gushed like heaven's rain, Nette. love that idea of kismet you inserted into it. VERY cool entry into the contest
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Date: 8/23/2012 7:17:00 PM
Amazing poetry by you Nette.You take us somewhere outside this world with your poetry!!!
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Date: 8/23/2012 12:48:00 PM
A truly masterful and wonderful piece, nice penning, great work!!Good luck in contest!! xoxo - Laila ;)
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Date: 8/23/2012 12:17:00 PM
Wow, Nette, you have written a truly phenomenal write here! I am so impressed with the ease at which this poem reads, it flows like water! I love this triumphant poem that sends intrigue to the brain! A truly masterful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/23/2012 11:48:00 AM
Wonderful imagination penned with magic like words. The treasures of nature themselves are pennies, lovely done. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/23/2012 11:25:00 AM
Could they write so beautiful already in 1936.... You are the best Nette :) - Wich you luck in contest !!! - Smile and be happy - oxox love // Anne-Lise // always//:)
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