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Penitent

If I should wake to live another day my soul would surely burst with boundless joy. On pious knee I would fervently pray, repentant soul would actively deploy. A full day of blessèd atonement wide, a soul on mission to pay its penance. Rapidly strolling with refreshing stride, repentance on recent fair countenance. A purposeful action of ascesis, my heart would be uplifted from its shame. A length of golden thread from Lachesis exonerating my well-deserved blame. Freed from infernal Hell I gladly die, blissful smile as my soul ascends the sky.

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Regina Elliott

Date: 4/4/2024 1:48:00 PM

Real beauteous sonnet of contrition, Linda. The last two lines especially moving. God's blessings to you. ~

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/4/2024 2:43:00 PM

Many thanks dear Regina. Appreciate your visit and comments. hugs and blessings! Linda :)

Paul Bell

Date: 3/26/2024 8:39:00 AM

Do we atone during our life, or do we wait till the end is nearing, and the grave diggers are getting restless? I'm exonerating you if you give me a reference to the upstairs cloud.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/26/2024 9:47:00 AM

Hey Paul Smiling here. I am hoping I wouldn't have to atone for any serious breaking of the rules toward the End. :)

Marugu Mo

Date: 3/26/2024 4:35:00 AM

Only that that penance was already paid. I enjoyed your fine poetry this morning Linda. Keep that ink flowing

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/26/2024 6:04:00 AM

If only Marugu. One should strive for a meaningful and compassionate life - now. You are a breath of freshness this morning dear Marugu. Many thanks for your visit and kind comments. :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/25/2024 2:34:00 PM

Dear Linda, your poem stirred my spirit. The imagery of repentance and atonement touched me deeply, showing me of the power of redemption and the weight of accountability. I loved how your words create a journey towards inner peace and spiritual liberation. Thank you for crafting such a moving piece that encourages introspection and renewal. - Blessings, Daniel

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/25/2024 2:49:00 PM

You are most welcome dear Daniel and I am grateful for your uplifting comments. hugs and blessings, Linda :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/25/2024 2:31:00 PM

wow, Linda! This is an amazing write. Title was perfect and I appreciate the Lachesis--quite effective. The act of repentance is powerful resulting in the uplifting last two lines..."as soul ascends the sky.' Nicely written. Have a blessed evening, hugs, Sara

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/25/2024 2:48:00 PM

Many thanks dear Sara. Your comments are always appreciated and I am very pleased that you enjoyed this poem. hugs and blessings, Linda :)