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Pen Disguised As a Hair Clip

Sat to jot down limerick in log book Inept to find my pen carried miffed look Probed my mum who lay on bed She guffawed and slapped my head The clutched one tumbled from hair as I shook Aug 29, 2020 Note:Limerick fun poetry Contest. Syllables checked: Howmanysyllables.com Sponsored by Tania Kitchin.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/7/2020 1:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. So Cute/funny. Now I know where to put my pen when I am not writing. Enjoy your win...............

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 6:59:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear Paula mam for your appreciation.LoL,Glad you enjoyed my work:-)Take care....

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/6/2020 8:40:00 AM

V.Deepa, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick!

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 6:57:00 AM

Thankyou dear Tania mam..for the appreciation and wishes:-) Keep inspiring as a sponsor and writer:-) Take care.Much love:-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/3/2020 12:23:00 PM

Hilarious! I can picture the scene! Many blessings.

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 6:56:00 AM

Thankyou dear Kim mam for the appreciation and blessings:-) Much love:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/3/2020 5:59:00 AM

A fun read Deepa--apt for the theme.

V. Deepa
Date: 9/3/2020 7:28:00 AM

Thankyou dear Vijay sir:-) Glad you enjoyed my work. Have a beautiful day.Take care:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2020 6:06:00 PM

What a clever idea for how that pen was not able to be discovered at first!! Well done!

V. Deepa
Date: 9/2/2020 1:41:00 PM

Ha ha.Thankyou for the lovely appreciation dear Andrea mam.:-) Have a wonderful day.Much love:-)

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2020 10:04:00 AM

Great limerick!

V. Deepa
Date: 9/2/2020 1:40:00 PM

Thankyou for the kind visit and appreciation.I truly cherish your words and blessings.:-) Have a beautiful day.Warm regards~Deepa:-)