Pen Disguised As a Hair Clip

Sat to jot down limerick in log book Inept to find my pen carried miffed look Probed my mum who lay on bed She guffawed and slapped my head The clutched one tumbled from hair as I shook
Aug 29, 2020 Note:Limerick fun poetry Contest. Syllables checked: Howmanysyllables.com Sponsored by Tania Kitchin.
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Goldsmith Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations on your win. So Cute/funny. Now I know where to put my pen when I am not writing. Enjoy your win...............
Deepa Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 6:59 AM
Thanks a lot dear Paula mam for your appreciation.LoL,Glad you enjoyed my work:-)Take care....
Kitchin Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 8:40 AM
V.Deepa, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick!
Deepa Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Thankyou dear Tania mam..for the appreciation and wishes:-) Keep inspiring as a sponsor and writer:-) Take care.Much love:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 12:23 PM
Hilarious! I can picture the scene! Many blessings.
Deepa Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 6:56 AM
Thankyou dear Kim mam for the appreciation and blessings:-) Much love:-)
Pandit Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 5:59 AM
A fun read Deepa--apt for the theme.
Deepa Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 7:28 AM
Thankyou dear Vijay sir:-) Glad you enjoyed my work. Have a beautiful day.Take care:-)
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 6:06 PM
What a clever idea for how that pen was not able to be discovered at first!! Well done!
Deepa Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 1:41 PM
Ha ha.Thankyou for the lovely appreciation dear Andrea mam.:-) Have a wonderful day.Much love:-)
One Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 10:04 AM
Great limerick!
Deepa Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 1:40 PM
Thankyou for the kind visit and appreciation.I truly cherish your words and blessings.:-) Have a beautiful day.Warm regards~Deepa:-)
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