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I plopped a moonbeam in a cup Poured in soft stardust - stirred it up Then gave that potion straight to you Now your eyes ... are moonlight blue (And what's more, they sparkle, too) Thus in your gaze the heavens dance One sweet libation ... a true romance! ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Love Potion" Poetry Contest, Julia Ward, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Surreal and Daft" Poetry Contest, Kevin Shaw, Judge & Sponsor.

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Elaine Perrin

Date: 11/14/2019 4:51:00 AM

I love this! Congratulations on your win :-) x

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/31/2019 10:46:00 PM

BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. I admire.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/31/2019 9:23:00 PM

Congrats on your gold medal win, Gregory.

David Drowley

Date: 10/31/2019 2:49:00 PM

'Greg,Congratulations on your win! A very well mixed potion. David'

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/31/2019 4:48:00 PM

Ha! Thank you so much, David - sometimes I get lucky, (especially with cooking, lol). Blessings! :-)

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 10/31/2019 12:50:00 PM

Gregory your gift for writing is amazing. And, this poem is so beautiful Lonna

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/31/2019 4:48:00 PM

You are very kind, Lonna, and I thank you so much for your comments! :-) <3

Julia Ward

Date: 10/31/2019 11:15:00 AM

Nicely done... Congratulations for your top position in my "Love Potion" contest.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/24/2017 4:07:00 AM

what a lovely little poem Greg:-) many congrats-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/16/2018 9:48:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan - this one is special to me for some reason - whimsy, I think? So pleased you enjoyed it, Dear Poet - wish I'd seen your comment before now, lol, (I apologize). Blessings! :-) <3

Roy Pett

Date: 11/18/2017 11:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Gregory, this is a joy to read, brilliant. :))

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/21/2017 1:32:00 AM

Thank you kindly, Roy, I'm glad you liked it ... this was fun! :-)

Barry Stebbings

Date: 11/18/2017 3:17:00 AM

Congratulations, Gregory, with this dreamy piece. // Barry

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/18/2017 6:36:00 AM

Thanks so much, Barry - so appreciated! :-)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 11/17/2017 9:09:00 PM

Back with sparkling congratulations! :) xomo

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/18/2017 6:35:00 AM

Thank you, my sparklingly poetic friend - much love and appreciation! :-) <3

Gary Smith

Date: 11/17/2017 3:24:00 PM

Congrats Gregory, a lovely little read :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/18/2017 6:34:00 AM

Thanks so much, Gary - very much appreciated! :-)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 9/12/2017 1:32:00 PM

A mighty fine wistful write, Greg. It made me smile. Beautiful romantic interplay. Great title too. Love and peace always.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/14/2017 4:19:00 AM

Blessings, my friend, and thank you so much! Much love and respect!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/9/2017 8:16:00 AM

A sparkling pen! Delighted. xomo!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/9/2017 8:19:00 AM

Blessings and thanks, Maureen - you are always kind to me! <3

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/8/2017 3:09:00 PM

I loved this incredible write Greg! This is such a tremendous poem my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing piece this afternoon, when I'm supposed to be doing exercises I have been on the computer (I'm mad at the therapist right now!)! He's not in the room of course, he's down the hall talking to all the female nurses! Ok, I'm done ranting! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/9/2017 4:26:00 AM

So you're a disgruntled patient, huh, lol?? This made me smile, Buddy - not because you're angry, but because this reminds me of myself, lol. Thanks SO much for the wonderful comment! I was telling someone about you today - my new friend who brings me sunshine - and I read my elderly mom this comment ... she said "That sounds like YOU!" :-) Blessings, my friend, and keep up the healing work!