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Peighinn Nam Fadhla - An T-Eilean Dorcha

We walked and talked for hours as we sat on the golden sands A fine yellow grain so soft, found on Benbecula's open lands We are so fortunate on this day no swell from the Atlantic shows The morning sun into the afternoon warms in smiling loving glow The salty air attracts our taste, as if to say it's there In splendid scenery surround we absorb and politely stare We marvel at the breakers as they land with a soft applause Taking in this day so calm, knowing nature can change with cause Our afternoon now wanes as we head back along the coast Looking forward to the evening ceilidh, and to this Dark Island we will toast http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/scotland-5.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/7/2011 7:55:00 PM
Very nice
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Date: 2/6/2011 6:47:00 AM
easy going lovely lines in this inspiration of yours James. love the fourth stanza. Meditative
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Date: 2/5/2011 4:48:00 PM
Wonderful images of the sea along the coast, James. The title made me think it was an entry for Paula's contest, but instead I discovered a different type of gem. Well done, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/5/2011 4:28:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work this eve..I am glad that I chose this one as one of the one that I read..Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara
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