Notes About The Poem

Peering Eyes of Hope

Wide,
peering
eyes of hope
kissed by sunshine,
ascertain promise in the horizon.
Clusters of grey clouds hovering above
have disappeared.
View of the...
future,
bright.


Double Tetractys 2 Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by Eve Roper
Number of Photo: 1
Date written: 09/07/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mcgee Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 9:36 AM
a nice uplifting piece. Congrats.
Ibeh Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 11:41 AM
Thank you, Jeanne:-)
Fowler Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 6:36 AM
Very nicely written Edward. Hope is a step toward the promise of a bright future ;) Congratulations, Linda
Ibeh Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 7:02 AM
True indeed! Thank you,Linda:-)
Mitra Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 10:07 PM
Nice Edward....Hope is forever a constant....Congrats on your win
Ibeh Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 7:01 AM
Thank you very much, Carol:-)
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 6:49 PM
Lovely write, Edward. I chose this picture because it reminded me of hope .. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve..
Ibeh Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 7:01 AM
Thank you very much for my placement and congratulations, Eve:-) Stay blessed, my friend!<3
Kauffman Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 3:32 PM
I like your "eyes of hope kissed by the sunshine." Really nice picture of two friends captured in a moment of time - lovely image! Best of luck for the contest!
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 4:31 PM
Thank you very much, Sam:-)
Dutta Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 9:19 AM
Very Nice. All the best.
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 4:31 PM
Thank you, Anisha:-)
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