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Peeling the Violin

PEELING THE VIOLIN . . . . ~ ~ ~ . . . .
~ swerving along its waxed wood rapturous strains sweep alto mood bow’s strings peeling my plight… in the unmentionable softness of moonlight. holding its hips to warm the cure scales of moans vibrating satin pure a glide to and fro connects pitches right… in the sweet tender softness of moonlight. and my world of solace will sustain tunes whispering gladness and pain the voice of God enters my fiddling night… in the unmentionable softness of moonlight. ~
For Briand Strand--- 2011 Posted Poems 14 Line By nette onclaud ( missed entering this for previous Max 14 Lines contest)

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Date: 6/29/2011 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:40:00 PM
this is so wonderful. I am finally seeing this older winners' list trying to get a feel for what Brian likes before entering another similar contest he is having tonight. Belated congrats on this one. I promise to see a newer poem of yours later tonight. LUv, Andrea ps. I cannot believe Chris's contest flew right past me!!
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Date: 6/13/2011 2:02:00 AM
lovely verse, strains at the strings, sensual n everything....xo...Don
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Date: 6/11/2011 5:43:00 PM
Sensual and dream-like ambience in his spellbindng kyrielle, dear Nette. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on you first place win
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:01:00 AM
Do you play ??? One thing for sure, is that you write with the same exquisite music!! Congratulations!!
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Date: 6/11/2011 7:43:00 AM
congrats on your win with this great piece. cory
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Date: 6/11/2011 2:31:00 AM
Beautifully worded piece, one doesn't get to read poems referring to violin,so this is like a rare find..this would sure have been placed high in the winners list ,had you entered it...huggs dear nette,gautami
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Date: 6/11/2011 1:54:00 AM
You do wonders with pen.Congrats on your well deserved first place win in Brian's contest! Huggs*
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Date: 6/10/2011 11:27:00 PM
This is wonderful, Nette. I bet it places high. I think you do really well when you focus on one beautiful line and repeat it like this. It gives your poetry such an easy relaxed flow!
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Date: 6/10/2011 2:25:00 PM
Love the way you describe the music of the night in your poem, Nette. Very creative entry for Brian's contest. Winning wishes headed your way. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/9/2011 1:36:00 PM
Good one that I am sure will impress Brian..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the understanding about my pet's death...Sara
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Date: 6/9/2011 1:05:00 PM
Wow! Nette. I have to read this verses twice to feel it. How nice to connect the peeling violin to your inner voice. Thank you for sharing and goodluck always! May your creative thoughts always flow like an unrestricted river. Love Dalila
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Date: 6/9/2011 11:56:00 AM
Excellent write Nette!A great entry for the contest.Best wishes.
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Date: 6/9/2011 11:27:00 AM
a great poem, good luck in contest.
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Date: 6/9/2011 11:10:00 AM
Wow, great lines with wonderful conclusion. Luv, Adeleke. Soupmaik;)
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:11:00 AM
intriguing write Nette Luv and an absolute vision with your descriptive lines. good luck in the contest my friend.. sense another winner too..
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