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Peek In Through My Window

Wet wings hold back the morning song clouds cover what was meant to be a perfect day a loose boulder rolls uphill after an earthquake mountaintops screech it's time for tea but I'm relegated to run away Laying low in a one-act show bundled in tinted eyes of baby blue opening lost love letters never sent spilt drops of honey in shades of red encompass somber sounds of want Peek in through my window past a painted pain innocence took sharp edges smothered in waves of honor flapping up high in a hallowed field waiting to be folded and brought back home

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Date: 2/11/2017 10:02:00 PM
As a peek into this poem, I see its creativity, I really liked the lines "a loose boulder rolls uphill after an earthquake mountaintops screech it's time for tea"
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Date: 2/9/2017 3:11:00 PM
Very beautiful...but even very sad emotives Tim...Hope that peeking through your window..We ll see a smile..and light filtering through.
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/9/2017 3:33:00 PM
It's in there somewhere : ) ...thanks Charma
Date: 2/9/2017 2:50:00 PM
- A little sad flashback through your window, Tim - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/9/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thank you A-L
Date: 2/9/2017 11:27:00 AM
a vivid scene of a sadness too often re-enacted by too many. The last stanza is beautifully powerful. Very nicely done Tim
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/9/2017 11:32:00 AM
Thank you very much John
Date: 2/9/2017 11:01:00 AM
Great one Tim. Very well done .
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/9/2017 11:04:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.

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