Peek-A-Boo

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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: lines 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required.

A shy sun
plays peek-a-boo
with clouds
clogging the sky;
and barring its path.
Dyed in shades
of grey;
they gather
like sheep,
clustering
overhead;
grazing on blue skies.
And soon, melancholy
tears,
morph into raindrops.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/26/2024 11:27:00 AM

Hello Emile, yes the sun does this all the time with the clouds. I enjoyed this poem my fr4iend. My friend enjohy your day. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2024 11:29:00 AM

Hello Emile, Hi! i hope you are enjoying summer. i am. It is hot and humid here today. You are welcome my friend. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/26/2024 11:55:00 AM

Thanks, Darlene, as always, I appreciate and welcome your comments, my friend. Emile.