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A poem inspired by my son, as its his first day of final mock exams.. ugh time flies and as I can feel his nervousness... I write

Pearls of Prayers

T i me
I’m a mistress to your fleeting cycles,
constantly constricting,
russet-deep pupils
that see the maroon rain~
veiled in honey and turmeric flames…
Today I lift my hands
in s i l e n c e
to spin pearls of prayers
from
strings of patience...
for I am my Sun’s~
your maternal daffodil
singing songs of solace
as you rise~
facing the unknown
nestled on the cusp of summer storms,
while the sky wears dazzling dreams
and answers you seek,
tensed amidst the tourmaline
twinkling along 
the trail of thought…
Yet I hope
you'll trace seraphic streaks,
oblivious to the material mists.
Life goes beyond ink on paper~
    calculating missteps,
    evaluating errors.
We are more than specks of
sand and stardust,
sailing through streams
of lessons learned,
awaiting the return of winged comets~
for we are sleep-waltzing
through this sphere,
and to the angels, 
      we shall 
                 r e s u me

So let the frost of fears
and icy embers of terrors
thaw and melt,
rippling in waves of wisdom.
For you are more than a
prisoner to pages
of unresolved equations.
You are the constant, the sum,
the ultimate key to the paradox.
Remember~
my love for you
weighs heavier than
trinkets and treasures…
You are~
  the rhyme to my sonnet,
          the reason to my rhythm,
                    the muse that prompts me,
and I breathe,
     and I live
to be your
twilight
when the world
forgets that 
you
are
  an ethereal star,
            brighter than the rosiest dawns.
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Gifford Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 4:42 AM
Hello Ink, this is such a beautifully, heartfelt and touching write. I felt your love in your every word, a bond so strong and deep. A mother’s love is priceless. Your is truly Blessed. I wish him endless success on his journey. Stay blessed my dear friend.
Beaufort Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 9:59 AM
IE, you are a wonderful mom. We do worry about our kids (I have two) and will help them with our love and affection when they are young and when they may struggle. I see you know the right balance of support...that's clear in your work. I hope he finds his purpose in work and that you can watch proudly and joyously. The power we have we should exercise with restraint, and I love how you know where your limits stand. It's truly lovely.
Junaid Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 5:32 AM
Dear Ink, your words really left an imprint on my heart. A mother's love for her children is truly selfless and unparalleled. I loved the last stanza, especially.
DiMino Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 8:01 AM
"Life goes beyond ink on paper~ calculating missteps, evaluating errors. We are more than specks of sand and stardust," -- and less than specks of stardust. More or less~ everything. "my love for you weighs heavier than trinkets and treasures… You are~ the rhyme to my sonnet," That is sooooooo beautiful!
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 10:14 PM
Wow, your son is so loved. I wish I could write such a gem for MY son, but I've already told you about him, haha. Your words really display your emotions, your worries for him and your admiration
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 2:56 AM
Ah yes i remember, i sent this to my son when he got home from exams and he loved it! Always grateful for your kind support
Buehler Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 10:01 PM
Your tribute to your son is very lovely, Ink. What a wonderful, touching poem. Stunningly beautiful imagery! Blessings.
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 2:57 AM
Thank you so much dear evelyn always for your kind support
Rose  Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 8:53 PM
I breathe, and I live to be your twilight when the world forgets that you are an ethereal star, brighter than the rosiest dawns. My that son of yours is lucky to have you as his mom :)
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 2:59 AM
Awn im lucky to have him, and thank you for your kind comment dear rose
Rolland Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 4:38 PM
sure he will feel better after reading this love song, with stupendous sounds and images, i hope he will, thanks for the moving poetry
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:01 AM
Awn thank you so much dear yann
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 2:26 PM
Nice tribute to your son! The end is great! Best wishes for both of you :-)
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:02 AM
Thank you always dear AA grateful for your kind support
Hind Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 2:12 PM
So thoughtful of you to write and encourage him - I hope he carries it close to his heart. This is so beautiful, Ink.
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:03 AM
Thank you sweet paige
Read Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 10:04 AM
Lovely tribute to your wonderful son dear Ink, sending both of you my love and best wishes for the future God bless.
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:05 AM
Awn thank you so much appreciate your kindness always
Kendrick Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 7:21 AM
Yes, school can be hard for those who want to get an education and the higher up they go the harder it gets. I feel for him and for you. I always felt if I had studied that I was prepared for the test but sometimes a teacher can throw a person a curve ball. Thanks for sharing the rollercoaster of emotions. Sara K
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:14 AM
Thank you so much dear sara, and for sharing your thoughts too. Appreciate your kind response
Sands Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 6:58 AM
Wow. Great poem, inspired by your son. Love the ending too. :)
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:16 AM
Thank you so very much dear heidi, grateful for your kind support
Edmonds  Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 5:57 AM
That’s so lovely Ink, it brought tears to my eyes. What a treasure this poem is for your son to cherish. How blessed you both are… Beryl
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:24 AM
Awn thank you so much dear beryl, so kind of you, grateful for your sincere support
George Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 4:05 AM
What sweet assurance of love and guidance from a mother to her son, who is indeed a sun to her, radiating light and warmth into her life. I love the spontaneous expression of such heartfelt sentiments. "So let the frost of fears and icy embers of terrors thaw and melt, rippling in waves of wisdom. For you are more than a prisoner to pages of unresolved equations. You are the constant, the sum, the ultimate key to the paradox." This is the crux of your poem. Such great words of wisdom! Your son, when he is able to fathom the full depth of your lines will be all appreciation for his mother. I must say that he is so fortunate to have such wise guidance from you..... a true blessing. I am sure, he won't disappoint you and is going to come out in flying colors. My Best wishes and prayers!
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:30 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment, prayers and well wishes sweet valsa! You truly always are a gem
Rhymes Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 1:55 AM
He sure is an ethereal star , so well said and touching . A mother can feel a son’s nervousness . And you have comforted him so well in this . Love it
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:30 AM
Awn thank you dahlin always
Onpaper Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 1:43 AM
russet-deep pupils that see the maroon rain veiled in honey and turmeric flames… mmmmmm the imagary is absolutely diviiiiiine papi!!! .. your maternal daffodil singing songs of solace as you rise.. awwwn the pride n joy in that line!!! Absolutely loving it!! We are more than specks of sand and stardust, sailing through streams of lessons learned,.. yaaaz love the flow there aeee .. For you are more than a prisoner to pages of unresolved equations. ooo the strength in that!!! The undieing beauty of your love is amazing!!
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:30 AM
Awwn papi thank you
Singh Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 1:42 AM
Message of hope,resilience and importance of looking beyond material world to find deeper meanings seen in this nicely written poem.Very well done.
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:33 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind support
Meadows Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 1:04 AM
Such a beautiful poem for your son, written with love and pride.Beautiful!!
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:33 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind support always
Sharma  Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 12:22 AM
My gosh, this one indeed made me beyond emotional too!! I could feel your motherly sentiments and the pure warmth that your heart possesses, it's just so true and unconditional. Your son is so blessed to have you as his guiding angel and so are you, to have his serene sunshine in your life! The anxiousness and nervousness of stepping into the unknown, especially for the first time, when this is going to be the major turn in his career ~ I deeply resonate with this as I myself have gone through the same journey, a year ago. I wish your son so much success and happiness and that the God may always be that ray of faith, to align all the stars in his favour and for his own good. There are so many lines that are incredibly creative and profound in this piece!!! And I'm sure my mother too, would love this poem a lot ~ and resonate to the core! "Life goes beyond ink on paper~ calculating missteps, evaluating errors", "You are the constant, the sum, the ultimate key to the paradox"
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:34 AM
Your comment left me in tears, so heartfelt and kind you and your mom both are! Thank you always for being so very supportive. Sending you light always
Sharma  Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 12:27 AM
"and I breathe, and I live to be your twilight when the world forgets that you are an ethereal star, brighter than the rosiest dawns." I'm am absolutely awestruck by these soul-stirring lines which warm my spirit in so many ways! You are a poetic genius, my dear Ink! And I'm really in awe of the manner in which you've presented this too, looks so artistic! Best wishes to you and ur son both, everything will shine bright, loving ahead for u both, I'm sure!! Sending light and loveeee, this is a FAVE
Rhymes Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 12:19 AM
Beautiful as always
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