Pearl Dreams of Rare Love
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Author's Notes: "Pearl Dreams of Rare Love " is a co-write / co-authored poem from Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid. Our purpose with this poem, rendered in 14 unrhymed Tercet sequential stanzas is to portray the ethereal image of a 14-pearl gold necklace (concatenated -- or joined together -- with the finest gold chain). Additionally, our poetic vision or theme with this write is predicated on the notion that this "14-pearl gold necklace" was actually forged together by both forces from Heaven above and the alchemic magical influence from the deep-salted ocean below on Earth itself. Liam and I envisioned this write to be quite magical in nature with the metaphor of "Pearl Dreams of Rare Love" being forged by godly forces in Heaven and on Earth and rendered into a most wondrous and brilliant 14-pearl gold necklace. This necklace, in effect, signifies or is the palpable manifestation representing the poetic notion of "Pearl Dreams of Rare Love." At least this was our mutual intent with this particular poem. (Gary Bateman - November 16, 2014) (Terza Rima in unrhymed Tercet poetic format)
Categories: beauty, emotions, heaven, imagery, love, magic, and ocean.
Break these chains that bind
holding in the deep ovens
blazing a fire for love.
Smiling midday moon
dressed in a baby blue sky
with sparsely scattered clouds dot.
White mother of pearl
their silver lining treasure
held soft beautiful warm babe.
In her finger beams
a light touching inside thoughts
sitting posed at three o’clock.
The moon just pops out
in kissing a golden sun
white ivory pearls smiling.
Within daylight thoughts
sweetly I pray in sunlight
shining warm all over you.
Deep ocean salted
with the bluest warmest waves
luster smiles sunshine color.
The magic tear drop
forms the silver lining bright
and cries for ivory pearls.
Alchemic water
wondrous most blue, dark and rare
lies love in Salt of the Earth.
Mermaids caress hope
encouraging happiness
makes all the more magical.
Pearl chain links in place
Neptune commands do it now
with finest gold most smiling.
Bathed best and brightest
white ivory pearls ready
for their concatenation.
Neptune’s grandeur finds
all sea creatures in awe now
abounds pearl dreams of rare love.
Pearl Dreams of Rare Love
14 linked all so precious
from the ocean’s heart and soul.
Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem,
Copyright © All Rights Reserved (November 16, 2014)
(Terza Rima in Unrhymed Tercet poetic format)
Copyright © Gary Bateman | Year Posted 2014
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