Jean Murray Poet Rhyme

Peanut Butter Cup

I think Jack wants me fat.
In fact I am sure of that.
I always ask for one scoop.
Waistlines expand with that gloop.
He insists on giving three.
All for the same fee.
Poor, poor pitiful me.
I can't resist you see.
Peanut Butter Cup counter.
The place where I always flounder.

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Pashang Salehi May 26, 2017 at 5:40 PM LOL... I wish you were here... Jean Murray May 26, 2017 at 5:55 PM Would you eat my other two scoops Pashang?

Just James May 22, 2017 at 12:42 AM Sounds like the perfect place! Jean Murray May 22, 2017 at 1:23 AM It is for me James. I go when I want to switch off. Sometimes, at an afternoon show, I have the cinema to myself......like Michael Jackson.

Andrea Dietrich May 21, 2017 at 5:32 PM Jean, I just had to see THIS one because I adore peanut butter in ice cream. But in chocolate it's BETTER!! BIG chunks of it in smooth chocolate ice cream!! Tasty poem Jean Murray May 21, 2017 at 5:36 PM Hi Andrea. Like you I love movies and go to the cinema a lot. I was thinking of Snatched until I read a comment on your cinema review post recently.That leaves Arthur. Should I venture I wonder? My extra large tub is calling to me.

Lim'Rik Flats May 16, 2017 at 9:44 AM GOTD! (giggle of the day award) The dreaded "flounder at the counter" — love it! maraschinocherryhugs ~ j Jean Murray May 16, 2017 at 12:03 PM Hi John. I have not been stirring my poetrysoup recently. I must return and add more laughter to the mix. Thank you for your welcome visit. Your giggles are infectious.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2017 at 3:55 AM - Enjoy your Peanut butter cup, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jean Murray May 14, 2017 at 4:29 AM Morning Anna-Lise. Nice day for the garden here. Hope you are also enjoying your weekend.

Daniel Turner May 13, 2017 at 10:46 PM You only live once, Jean. Go for it:) Jean Murray May 14, 2017 at 2:37 AM My Daddy used to say "You are only young twice." It must be that child in me that can "resist everything except temptation."

Ilene Bauer May 13, 2017 at 5:19 PM just go for it, jean! some things are not meant to resist. i enjoyed your poem and can definitely relate to it... Jean Murray May 13, 2017 at 5:24 PM Hello Ilene. It's just so yummy. I often go to the cinema and never miss the oppertuinity to indulge. Hence the bulge!

Connie Marcum Wong May 13, 2017 at 5:13 PM I can relate to your cute poem Jean. I adore peanut butter flavor. I am semi vegetarian and peanut butter is a great protein for me. I am sure I would love the ice cream. 7 ; ) Jean Murray May 13, 2017 at 5:17 PM Hi Connie. It's addictive. I wouldn't recommend it....

Tim Smith May 13, 2017 at 1:58 PM I think Jack's a keeper...you can always walk home Jean Murray May 13, 2017 at 2:46 PM Jack is the DJ who spun the discs at Rena's 21th Tim. He works at the local cinema. I was a classmate of his mum.